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Edge of Fire
I quietly kneel in the shadows
Heavenly sin knows my name
Giving self and receiving same
I'm a broken goddess on my knees
As I silently beg my Master please
Like an addict I wait for fix
Wanting short pass across the Styx
In passion's mini-deaths
Gasping whimper on heated breath
Cool as Ice, Hot as Hell
He knows my needs very well
Depending on his mood's desire
He will lead me to the edge of fire
Brutal caress with ecstasies rise
Dip my head with downcast eyes
Sensuous freedom within restraining grip
He pulls my chain to start the trip
(enjoying my Saturday)
Heavenly sin knows my name
Giving self and receiving same
I'm a broken goddess on my knees
As I silently beg my Master please
Like an addict I wait for fix
Wanting short pass across the Styx
In passion's mini-deaths
Gasping whimper on heated breath
Cool as Ice, Hot as Hell
He knows my needs very well
Depending on his mood's desire
He will lead me to the edge of fire
Brutal caress with ecstasies rise
Dip my head with downcast eyes
Sensuous freedom within restraining grip
He pulls my chain to start the trip
(enjoying my Saturday)
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Re: Edge of Fire
20th May 2014 10:46pm
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20th May 2014 10:52pm
Mr. Hash.. :) glad you liked :) Thank you for reading and commenting.. you are appreciated :) with respect..domore
Re: Edge of Fire
21st May 2014 5:15am
this line truly hit the spot for me.. {Sensuous freedom within restraining grip}
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re: Re: Edge of Fire
21st May 2014 5:21am
Thank you 7th :) I'm so glad you liked...cheers to hitting the spot :) with much respect..xoxo domore
Re: Edge of Fire
21st May 2014 6:18am
"I'm a broken goddess on my knees
As I silently beg my Master please
Like an addict I wait for fix"
your erotica always makes me miss submission. love the sensual anticipation in this piece, beautiful domore xo
As I silently beg my Master please
Like an addict I wait for fix"
your erotica always makes me miss submission. love the sensual anticipation in this piece, beautiful domore xo
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re: Re: Edge of Fire
21st May 2014 6:32am
Lovely Kat... :) your words mean so very much to me :) thank you for the read and your consistent "lifts" .. sincerely appreciate..with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: Edge of Fire
21st May 2014 6:28am
Ms D, I enjoyed this immensely. :) Excellent!
'As I silently beg my Master please'
'Cool as Ice, Hot as Hell'
These and the final two lines are favs.
Though completely different, this piece caused me to reflect on something written in 2009.
'As I silently beg my Master please'
'Cool as Ice, Hot as Hell'
These and the final two lines are favs.
Though completely different, this piece caused me to reflect on something written in 2009.
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re: Re: Edge of Fire
21st May 2014 2:29pm
Mr. VP... pleased to provide a lil enjoyment :) Thank you for the read..and always positive comments :).. you know.. you'll have to share the piece from 2009 :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
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21st May 2014 3:01pm
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21st May 2014 3:25pm
yessssss you did! :) sorry I didn't see before I made comment... LOL thank you again :) xoxo
Re: Edge of Fire
21st May 2014 3:34pm
whimpers of submission
on her bruised knees
waiting patently on her mat
for commands that please
into the shackles that bind
bind her security
off to ecstasies trip
chained to his fantasy
Beautifully written as always Domore, always a pleasure reading your deep desires laced in hot dripping inked.
on her bruised knees
waiting patently on her mat
for commands that please
into the shackles that bind
bind her security
off to ecstasies trip
chained to his fantasy
Beautifully written as always Domore, always a pleasure reading your deep desires laced in hot dripping inked.
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re: Re: Edge of Fire
21st May 2014 4:41pm
Awakened.. thank you for your ever pleasing words.. they leave me dreamily walking in imaginings wake.. so very glad that you receive a measure of pleasure from my work.. with deepest respect.. xoxo domore
Re: Edge of Fire
25th May 2014 4:33pm
you rocked it here domore
i saved it to read again
you should write more often about this subject
i saved it to read again
you should write more often about this subject
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re: Re: Edge of Fire
28th May 2014 7:15pm
Thank you Mr. Sins :) I am soo very pleased you liked :) and that this lil naughty write has found a home in your RL :) with respect..domore
Re: Edge of Fire
29th May 2014 5:48am
well scripted interlude of bondage & discipline. painful pleasure kindled...
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re: Re: Edge of Fire
29th May 2014 6:34am
Thank you kindly Mr Feddeler.. I thank you for the read and the wonderful comment.. it is a pleasure for me that you have visited my ink...with much respect to you.. domore