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BBQ
That noise
The crackling
Sizzling sound
Waiting to sink
my teeth into
that slowly
cooked piece
of meat
The crackling
Sizzling sound
Waiting to sink
my teeth into
that slowly
cooked piece
of meat
Published 10th May 2014
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10th May 2014 7:08pm
10th May 2014 8:07pm
I'll be right over with pork 'n beans and potato salad...Yuuuuummmmmmmy. Oh si it BYOM?
Thanks for the fun read, Tommie!
Thanks for the fun read, Tommie!
10th May 2014 8:12pm
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10th May 2014 8:34pm
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11th May 2014 3:52am
11th May 2014 11:17am
I like licking the sauce off my fingers ... feeling it drip off my chin ... Going for seconds or thirds ... Eating it on the go can be tricky.
Cool piece
Cool piece
13th May 2014 10:12pm
13th May 2014 11:21pm
I agree with Hashman. It makes my mouth water with anticipation. I'm hungry! Enjoyed it.
