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Re: Ouch
11th May 2014 10:15pm
Re: Ouch
Anonymous
12th May 2014 2:19am
Ouch is right.....hope your foot heals and your heart. :)
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Re: Ouch
Anonymous
20th May 2014 1:22am
Unfortunately no type of shoe can protect you from that pain ;-)
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re: Re: Ouch
4th Jun 2014 3:59pm
Re: Ouch
3rd Jun 2014 10:12pm
I like this poem. It's almost an anti-haiku. Here's hoping you never get another pain in the foot! Whether that pain be thorn- or lover-delivered... (By the way, thank you for teaching me a new word in "mesquite".)
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Re. Ouch
14th Jan 2019 9:58pm
Sounds like a pain. When it heals, but a scar will remain to remind you. Nice write, short and simple, but got the message across quite well. Enjoyed it!
Had to skim through a couple of pages of poetry to find one that wasn't erotica, heh. I was glad to see that you are not completed limited to one genre. Thanks for sharing!
Had to skim through a couple of pages of poetry to find one that wasn't erotica, heh. I was glad to see that you are not completed limited to one genre. Thanks for sharing!
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