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Tiny Box
Inside a tiny box
lays a tiny key
to my tiny heart
A toxic shock
that really hurt,
Pandora's Box
I was left to rot,
I'm vacant.
No feelings spared
no one here to care,
left alone
soon became
my home,
I'm fragile.
Tucked away
and out of sight,
always in the darkness
never in the light
I am heartless..
Writers note
I am heartless because my heart is damaged.
So in theory I am unlovable.
lays a tiny key
to my tiny heart
A toxic shock
that really hurt,
Pandora's Box
I was left to rot,
I'm vacant.
No feelings spared
no one here to care,
left alone
soon became
my home,
I'm fragile.
Tucked away
and out of sight,
always in the darkness
never in the light
I am heartless..
Writers note
I am heartless because my heart is damaged.
So in theory I am unlovable.
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 9th May 2014
| Edited 20th Apr 2024
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Re: Tiny Box
Re: Tiny Box
9th May 2014 7:24am
I feel your fierce heart and spirit lovely lady.. great expression of emotions :) with love Crim
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10th May 2014 3:51am
Re: Tiny Box
9th May 2014 8:15am
Oh nooo, not heartless, cause if you could feel all those emotions, truly your heart is open. Such gloom to this ink, yet written tenderly. Xo
Me likes Zazz....
Me likes Zazz....
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Thanks for reading Rain, your words are always welcomed.
Peace and much love.
Zazzles
Peace and much love.
Zazzles
Re: Tiny Box
Anonymous
9th May 2014 2:29pm
Yes beautifully written!
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10th May 2014 4:02am
Thanks, I only hope it flows the way it did in my mind out loud. Thanks for the read Dkruie
Zazzles
Zazzles
Re: Tiny Box
Anonymous
9th May 2014 8:50pm
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re: Re: Tiny Box
10th May 2014 4:18am
Thanks Gabriel,
I Was trying a different style. Thanks for the read :)
Peace
that's from the second stanza but it has 5 lines
see?
A toxic shock
that really hurt
Pandora's Box
I was left to rot,
I'm
vacant...
I Was trying a different style. Thanks for the read :)
Peace
that's from the second stanza but it has 5 lines
see?
A toxic shock
that really hurt
Pandora's Box
I was left to rot,
I'm
vacant...
Re: Tiny Box
9th May 2014 10:19pm
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10th May 2014 4:18am
Re: Tiny Box
9th May 2014 10:38pm
Sounds to me you are protecting your fragile heart for if you are heartless there is nothing to break. Interesting read, written very well
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Hello, I wasn't really. It's more that my heart is in a box because it doesn't work therefore I'm heartless.
And Metaphorically speaking, unlovable.
Thanks for the read from me Awakenedsoul :)
Zazzles
And Metaphorically speaking, unlovable.
Thanks for the read from me Awakenedsoul :)
Zazzles
Re: Tiny Box
9th May 2014 11:02pm
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17th May 2014 5:10am
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17th May 2014 5:41pm
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Anonymous
17th May 2014 5:58pm
While this is poignant, it is also beautiful. Wonderful work. ^-^
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17th May 2014 10:03pm
Hi Brittany nice to meet you.
Thanks for stopping by and reading from me
and thanks for your very nice comments :)
Zazzles
Thanks for stopping by and reading from me
and thanks for your very nice comments :)
Zazzles
Re: Tiny Box
21st May 2014 1:51am
an amazingly emotional write!
such a sad transitions
Heartless I think not!
such a sad transitions
Heartless I think not!
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21st May 2014 5:08am
Yup still dealing with it.
Thanks for coming to read from me Glynis :)
Your words mean a lot..
Zazzles
I'll be by to read from you this week ")
Thanks for coming to read from me Glynis :)
Your words mean a lot..
Zazzles
I'll be by to read from you this week ")
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re: Re: Tiny Box
24th Feb 2015 9:39pm
Using my own catchphrase against me , well then.
I have no choice but to shut it DOWN!!!
loves you Taryn...
Zazzles...
PS Thank you for the read my lovely!!
tonight it's your night i'm all over your page and then some!!! Wait for me!!!
I have no choice but to shut it DOWN!!!
loves you Taryn...
Zazzles...
PS Thank you for the read my lovely!!
tonight it's your night i'm all over your page and then some!!! Wait for me!!!
Re: Re. Tiny Box
20th Apr 2024 1:26am
Didn’t see rhis comment shadowcat.
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. Have a wonderful evening.
Zazzles :)
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. Have a wonderful evening.
Zazzles :)
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13th Jul 2018 8:15pm
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20th Apr 2024 1:27am
Xmar! Sorry for overlooking this comment so long ago. I hope you’re doing well. Haven’t heard from you in a while.
Hugs
Jackie xo
Hugs
Jackie xo
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19th Apr 2024 5:24am
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