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family
I listen to them fight
About coffee
And think about how petty
The world is
We are the discordant symphany
Of people who don't know
How to get along
Righteousness apparently
More important than happiness
As though any of us
Happen to know
What happiness is
Our spirits so blunted
By human monotony
We self-destruct at the first sign
Of joy
(C) Indie Adams 2014
About coffee
And think about how petty
The world is
We are the discordant symphany
Of people who don't know
How to get along
Righteousness apparently
More important than happiness
As though any of us
Happen to know
What happiness is
Our spirits so blunted
By human monotony
We self-destruct at the first sign
Of joy
(C) Indie Adams 2014
Published 8th May 2014
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8th May 2014 00:56am
it's what Christopher Isherwood
called "tea table-ing" writing,
capturing the petty disagreements
of life, which are our quiet
tragedies...it's really well caught
here, Indie...
called "tea table-ing" writing,
capturing the petty disagreements
of life, which are our quiet
tragedies...it's really well caught
here, Indie...
8th May 2014 1:21am
We self-destruct at the first sign
Of joy
... That is such a great hook - filled with such bitter truth.
Of joy
... That is such a great hook - filled with such bitter truth.
8th May 2014 3:08pm
