Three

i shall reply now.

i like the response poem you wrote! it has a fine contradiction

no im not better than you.
we both have our different styles.

But one's own leisure
ending the endeavor
Speak of delight
end the young girl
in fright.

For you think a poet
a duet of sorts
but not of a duel
on which one retorts
to the others comments
concerns about life
the ideals are assured
but you are causing of strife

Be silent once more!
Again and again
for a phantom I be
for her a guardian
I write with my power
with note in my hand
shadows casted from words
to end your poetic land.

To desire to have all Three again, but yet be so strange.  Tearful and touching

Heartfelt and touching poem..peace Crim

im sorry everyone. the last word is not strange but stranger!
i missed the "r"

thank you everyone for your kind comments. your feedback is much appreciated

an elegant offering from the flow of your pen

The feelings have been like trying to hit something opaque to see the other side which you can assume but not able to see. A very tragical sort of feeling that wants to shatter the otherwise. I will say cruel piece of writing and me craving for more, I want to see and I want to read you Ophie...

*blushing *
thank you thank you thank you

Lovely just lovely (:

This is a beautiful love ditty. The last line is a killer. No quibbles at all. Even your grammar and punctuation is perfect.

it's the first time:)
thanks a million

well i have to say it was very stunning and very heartmelting!

you are no stranger  
but a very good poet

what a touching poem this is. Thank you Again :)

amazing you replied  
and my memory denied  
to even thank you  

apologies ma'am

just posted smally one

'''they both twist theirs''
do spare a moment poet friendly  

this  still remains
on my reading list