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I savor the aftertaste
at this given moment.
The very reason I retire
so early is to be closer
than I ever could
in real life.
Many dreams come to
visit me on solo voyages
often masked in her scent,
ablaze with her beauty.
And then I awaken
far from where I left off.
at this given moment.
The very reason I retire
so early is to be closer
than I ever could
in real life.
Many dreams come to
visit me on solo voyages
often masked in her scent,
ablaze with her beauty.
And then I awaken
far from where I left off.
Published 4th May 2014
| Edited 11th Mar 2015
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4th May 2014 7:29pm
a very deep and concentrated thought, well written poem to upbring those emotional feelings my freinds.
MY FAVORITE LINE:Many dreams come to
visit me on solo voyages
often masked in her scent,
ablaze with her beauty.
MY FAVORITE LINE:Many dreams come to
visit me on solo voyages
often masked in her scent,
ablaze with her beauty.
8th May 2014 9:35pm
27th May 2014 2:59am
27th May 2014 1:51pm
So you do...
Much appreciated. Glad my words can be related to by someone.
Much appreciated. Glad my words can be related to by someone.
8th Sep 2014 6:34pm
Beautiful ink. I don't have a favorite part, it's all good. The words truly resonate inside
8th Sep 2014 7:25pm
