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Re: Undress your soul for me
4th May 2014 00:57am
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4th May 2014 2:17pm
Re: Undress your soul for me
4th May 2014 5:15am
yeah, got my dollars, "take it off, take it off!" jk.... :)
It's a beautiful thang' to witness seeing that special someone exposed spiritually, having the peephole to their soul, seeing straight through them...
Beautiful and sensual piece, Read! Xo
It's a beautiful thang' to witness seeing that special someone exposed spiritually, having the peephole to their soul, seeing straight through them...
Beautiful and sensual piece, Read! Xo
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re: Re: Undress your soul for me
4th May 2014 2:18pm
Re: Undress your soul for me
4th May 2014 3:39pm
Favourite verse penultimate one. Is it coincidence or intentional that the words are flesh coloured?
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4th May 2014 4:43pm
Re: Undress your soul for me
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5th May 2014 10:13pm
Thank you so much Blue yes its more a study human sensuality and all its facets.
Red
Red
Re: Undress your soul for me
Anonymous
12th May 2014 4:23pm
I was re-reading the last stanza like a million times. "But our soul's nudity" AHHH great. Passionate write my friend, well done.
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18th Nov 2014 5:12pm
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17th Nov 2014 2:06pm
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18th Nov 2014 5:13pm