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A yummy bruised up dessert
I never wanna be touched affectionately just fucked
And so you desire for more of what I have not
Now my iniquities is all off nothing I posses
So hate me, despise me, be the death of me
Rejection for me, ignored, now hedonistic abuse seem heavenly
Confusion suffered in beauty but beaten purity in disgrace
Fractured spirit in fear feeds my aroused hunger
Blood puddles salty tears to conclude my dessert
Fulfillment shall see me to hell and back for more.
And so you desire for more of what I have not
Now my iniquities is all off nothing I posses
So hate me, despise me, be the death of me
Rejection for me, ignored, now hedonistic abuse seem heavenly
Confusion suffered in beauty but beaten purity in disgrace
Fractured spirit in fear feeds my aroused hunger
Blood puddles salty tears to conclude my dessert
Fulfillment shall see me to hell and back for more.
Published 30th Apr 2014
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30th Apr 2014 6:31am
say that...
I (.....) wanna be touched
affectionately
and endlessly
just fucked
regularly
as we have
one life only
ur exotic erotic poetry
draws more cum
than anyone else's total sum
so leave the darker side of poetry
hidden in some velvety's one
she will love to taste ur cum
sad though my thought alone..
take it or cum
I (.....) wanna be touched
affectionately
and endlessly
just fucked
regularly
as we have
one life only
ur exotic erotic poetry
draws more cum
than anyone else's total sum
so leave the darker side of poetry
hidden in some velvety's one
she will love to taste ur cum
sad though my thought alone..
take it or cum
30th Apr 2014 6:36am
Hahaha fuck man thats awesome...
WTF???? How are you doing this...I should steal your comments and publish them myself lols hard "again"...
Damn your good
Peace
Oh yeah I should've categorized this in erotica eh..,
WTF???? How are you doing this...I should steal your comments and publish them myself lols hard "again"...
Damn your good
Peace
Oh yeah I should've categorized this in erotica eh..,
1st May 2014 6:45am
if you can show urs harder than mine
u r fully welcum
so you may copy my some
and say u did cum
hard on is a blessing for some
in a moving vehicle train car airplane
my hard-on stays hard on
no rest no cum
but rests it seldom
does this to you also happen
then well done
by now you must have had a hardon
and may have sololy..... cum
sexy one!!!
just SMILE .....
u r fully welcum
so you may copy my some
and say u did cum
hard on is a blessing for some
in a moving vehicle train car airplane
my hard-on stays hard on
no rest no cum
but rests it seldom
does this to you also happen
then well done
by now you must have had a hardon
and may have sololy..... cum
sexy one!!!
just SMILE .....
1st May 2014 10:55pm
Anonymous
30th Apr 2014 2:00pm
Mmmmmmmm! This is sexy with just a touch of dark on the edge. Enjoyed this very much. :)
1st May 2014 1:14am
That's so cool coz u was aiming for dark n sexy
Thanks for getting it lolz JW4CPlolz
Thanks for getting it lolz JW4CPlolz
30th Apr 2014 7:22pm
....now this is different ink from you. What brand of vodka your pen been drinking? ;) haha....
I want some....
I want some....
1st May 2014 1:16am
1st May 2014 6:49am
1st May 2014 10:56pm
OK trying now
I might be limited to what I can do
as I'm using a phone ...
:)
I might be limited to what I can do
as I'm using a phone ...
:)
2nd May 2014 10:14am
if u can't then tell me I will say should be over 18 erotic then they will do it ok
4th May 2014 10:48pm
23rd Jul 2014 6:20am
Mmmmmm.....ur title says it all hun. What a dark yummy dessert this would be
Belle
Belle
23rd Jul 2014 7:53am
