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Re: the understanding...
29th Apr 2014 1:04am
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29th Apr 2014 4:07am
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29th Apr 2014 10:34am
Re: the understanding...
6th May 2014 7:42pm
In it's own way, this is really an
amazing poem. Why is it that a shared intimacy
can push us apart as easily as bring us together?
And can intimacy sometimes mean that a little
more distance in friendship is too much to bear?
Whole novels have been written to describe what you did in 6 lines. Well done, paul...
amazing poem. Why is it that a shared intimacy
can push us apart as easily as bring us together?
And can intimacy sometimes mean that a little
more distance in friendship is too much to bear?
Whole novels have been written to describe what you did in 6 lines. Well done, paul...
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re: Re: the understanding...
it may be that 'now she knows so
much about me, how can I ever
trust her again..?'
or perhaps it's not the fear that
she may leave, but rather what
of me she'll take away...
thanks, jag...
much about me, how can I ever
trust her again..?'
or perhaps it's not the fear that
she may leave, but rather what
of me she'll take away...
thanks, jag...
re: re: Re: the understanding...
10th May 2014 6:02pm
whatever she might take away, you gave to her freely,
but are you really so finite that you cannot regenerate?
but are you really so finite that you cannot regenerate?
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10th May 2014 7:07pm