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incomplete
somethings missing
i can feel it
as i awake
in dawns early light
i spark
a light
maybe its love
maybe its security
or something more
or less
a comfort
a steady hope
laugh it off
fine
over used
quite abused
can't get a feel
for the feeling
of complete
and satisfied
and alright
i long
for this
i can feel it
as i awake
in dawns early light
i spark
a light
maybe its love
maybe its security
or something more
or less
a comfort
a steady hope
laugh it off
fine
over used
quite abused
can't get a feel
for the feeling
of complete
and satisfied
and alright
i long
for this
Published 28th Apr 2014
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2014 00:51am
Smoking's bad for you!
28th Apr 2014 00:54am
Anonymous
28th Apr 2014 1:01am
It's a well constructed piece. I do like it because it's one way of describing incompleteness. Even I feel like that sometimes, so I can relate. Well written.
28th Apr 2014 2:31am
