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To whomever, wherever YOU are, IF again...
If it were possible
to measure the scope my love
the answer would be...infinite
If that sparkle in your eyes
could speak it would have spoke
in tongues that only angels can interpret
If I had the ability
to grace your life with all
would that would make you whole,
happy, and satisfied...?
If I could, I'd plant in you a seed
that when born...would be to birth you again
because there exists no one more precious
and full of love than you...
to measure the scope my love
the answer would be...infinite
If that sparkle in your eyes
could speak it would have spoke
in tongues that only angels can interpret
If I had the ability
to grace your life with all
would that would make you whole,
happy, and satisfied...?
If I could, I'd plant in you a seed
that when born...would be to birth you again
because there exists no one more precious
and full of love than you...
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Re: To whomever, wherever YOU are, IF again...
25th Apr 2014 6:10pm
Wow! This is beautiful Poetikmind. It's as if you would give world if you could.
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25th Apr 2014 11:30pm
Aaawwwww well thank u! N trust me, it's exactly what I'd do if I could! :) thank u so much :)
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25th Apr 2014 6:12pm
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26th Apr 2014 3:59am
I feel honored n humbled to do so my sweet Crim...thank you
for your wonderful thoughts n support always! :)
for your wonderful thoughts n support always! :)
Re: To whomever, wherever YOU are, IF again...
25th Apr 2014 7:28pm
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26th Apr 2014 2:00pm
Thank you sweetness I'm happy you liked this n truly appreciate your support :)
Re: To whomever, wherever YOU are, IF again...
25th Apr 2014 8:04pm
"If I could, I'd plant in you a seed that when born...would be to birth you again"
sort of reminds me of Egyptian mythology... loved it!
you write one hell of a love poem, Papi
sort of reminds me of Egyptian mythology... loved it!
you write one hell of a love poem, Papi
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26th Apr 2014 11:49pm
Aaaaawwww n you always say some of the sweetest things mami! Thank you sooooooo much, I'm deeply
grateful for your continued support :)
grateful for your continued support :)
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25th Apr 2014 8:37pm
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26th Apr 2014 11:59pm
Re: To whomever, wherever YOU are, IF again...
25th Apr 2014 8:42pm
Truly heartfelt, Poe, like a love letter written in crimson red ink, perfumed with roses, sealed with a kiss. LOVE IT!
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27th Apr 2014 5:05am
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25th Apr 2014 9:15pm
This is so Romantic & Sweet! I agree with Chi, like a love letter!
Beautiful!!=)
I love the title it just reaches & pulls you in!!
Beautiful!!=)
I love the title it just reaches & pulls you in!!
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27th Apr 2014 4:31am
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25th Apr 2014 9:17pm
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27th Apr 2014 5:54am
Lol young? I'll take it! lol
Thanks a ton bro. Ur the bestest in the westest lol
Thanks a ton bro. Ur the bestest in the westest lol
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25th Apr 2014 10:25pm
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27th Apr 2014 00:25am
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26th Apr 2014 2:09am
...you romantic devil you! Oh Poe, a woman can read your words and see clearly that you are a man with a tender side, then we read your rants and vents filled with such masculine anger to know that you are a protector, got a sista's back when sh*t pops off.
...I haven't a clue where my comment was going.o_O
...I haven't a clue where my comment was going.o_O
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re: Re: To whomever, wherever YOU are, IF again...
27th Apr 2014 3:33pm
You move me beyond what I can express adequately my sweet Rain... Thank you forever for your support n friendship :)
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Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 2:57am
Oh my sweet friend.....what a great write. Full of sensuality and beautiful thoughts of luv. The way most wish a soul would be so dedicated. Chance in a lifetime to feel such passion never imagined to experience. Xo :)
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27th Apr 2014 3:34pm
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26th Apr 2014 7:55pm
"If that sparkle in your eyes
could speak it would have spoke
in tongues"
What a beautiful image , thank you <3
could speak it would have spoke
in tongues"
What a beautiful image , thank you <3
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re: Re: To whomever, wherever YOU are, IF again...
27th Apr 2014 3:38pm
How sweet of you... Thank you for your thoughts on my ink, truly appreciate it :)
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1st May 2014 4:17am
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28th May 2014 3:56pm
Wow I'm so ashamed I hadn't realized you left me this sweet sweet comment! Thank u, promise to return the consideration
for your visit :)
for your visit :)
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Anonymous
28th May 2014 3:00pm
wholly beautiful....what more is there?
nice work my friend..passionate and lovely
peace :)
nice work my friend..passionate and lovely
peace :)
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re: Re: To whomever, wherever YOU are, IF again...
28th May 2014 3:58pm
Aaaawwww my beautiful friend, you so make me blush! Thank you sooooo much, truly appreciate you! :)
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30th May 2014 6:38am
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