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Close Everthing
Close your eyes
and begin to pray
Close your heart
and begin to phase
Close your mind
and begin to shield
Close your mouth
and begin to heal
Close your nose
and begin to breathe
Close your ears and maybe you can see
Its all up to you, if you
would close off everything
and begin to pray
Close your heart
and begin to phase
Close your mind
and begin to shield
Close your mouth
and begin to heal
Close your nose
and begin to breathe
Close your ears and maybe you can see
Its all up to you, if you
would close off everything
Published 25th Apr 2014
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25th Apr 2014 8:26pm
I liked t.
I like the message behind these words.
Nicely expressed Cheesecake! :D
Zazzles
Critique:
Close your eyes and maybe you can see
OR
close your eyes and maybe you'll see
it's up to you what you believe.
either way I get it and like this a lot.
I like the message behind these words.
Nicely expressed Cheesecake! :D
Zazzles
Critique:
Close your eyes and maybe you can see
OR
close your eyes and maybe you'll see
it's up to you what you believe.
either way I get it and like this a lot.
25th Apr 2014 9:11pm
Ahhhh a very nice opinion, Ill take it. The way u say it makes more sence :)
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Anonymous
30th Apr 2014 5:20am
Welcome to DU!! This is an excellent write to start us off with. Very visual and relatable. Enjoyed! :)
30th Apr 2014 6:01am
Thank You for welcoming me Flowergirl and it was very nice to reading some of your pieces as well, U all are very amazing gifted individuals.....
<3 Jess <3
<3 Jess <3
