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exactly...
if I could make one sentence fit,
with how I thought, or what I felt,
exactly, as a poet does...
until that time, I'll merely write...
Published 22nd Apr 2014
| Edited 23rd Apr 2014
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23rd Apr 2014 1:37am
yes, that's exactly how it is. I have to write 100 poems to find 3 or 4 good ones...
23rd Apr 2014 1:49pm
23rd Apr 2014 4:08am
Bukowski revealed to us God's realization: 'I see where I have made a lot of poets, but not much poetry.'...
23rd Apr 2014 1:53pm
23rd Apr 2014 10:26am
This makes me wonder how many good or even great poets - most whom we'll never know - walk away from their art because they never found that "one sentence" ...
... Thought provoking Paul S.
... Thought provoking Paul S.
23rd Apr 2014 1:55pm
One often feels tantalizingly
close...until the cold light of
day and the re-read...
close...until the cold light of
day and the re-read...
23rd Apr 2014 4:07pm
24th Apr 2014 00:14am
23rd Apr 2014 11:26pm
P r e c i s e l y.....
The power
of poetic precision...
(I too, am never happy with most of what i write....but then, i suffer from P.P.S. ~~"P.ersonal P.erfectionist S.yndrome. :/ (gol)
The power
of poetic precision...
(I too, am never happy with most of what i write....but then, i suffer from P.P.S. ~~"P.ersonal P.erfectionist S.yndrome. :/ (gol)
24th Apr 2014 00:18am
to be precise, indeed, it's
so very difficult...but I guess
if it wasn't, where would be
the art...
so very difficult...but I guess
if it wasn't, where would be
the art...
24th Apr 2014 00:57am
24th Apr 2014 1:28am
