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I'll stick to what I know, thanks...
I didn't learn
to swim, but
I can walk...
although not,
I admit, on
water...
Published 22nd Apr 2014
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22nd Apr 2014 9:18pm
22nd Apr 2014 11:55pm
thanks, it was meant as a bit
of an agnostic comment on
faith, would you believe..!
of an agnostic comment on
faith, would you believe..!
23rd Apr 2014 1:39am
so if the human body is 60% water and there's water in your feet, aren't you walking on water?
and if you had the faith of a mustard seed...
and if you had the faith of a mustard seed...
23rd Apr 2014 2:03pm
I can only reply
a little dryly,
that I know nothing
of the belief systems
of mustard seeds..:)
a little dryly,
that I know nothing
of the belief systems
of mustard seeds..:)
24th Apr 2014 8:12pm
24th Apr 2014 10:40pm
Quite possibly...as I say, I have
no knowledge of the thoughts or
feelings of, um, seeds...
no knowledge of the thoughts or
feelings of, um, seeds...
23rd Apr 2014 4:05pm
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