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Deepest Desire
To feel,
Just for once
An emotion that rings true.
To not have to pretend.
For my caresses
And soft words
To be more than a husk,
A mere reflection.
Sometimes I lay awake at night
And just wonder
Am I the only one?
*written for the 'what do you want?' Competition*
Just for once
An emotion that rings true.
To not have to pretend.
For my caresses
And soft words
To be more than a husk,
A mere reflection.
Sometimes I lay awake at night
And just wonder
Am I the only one?
*written for the 'what do you want?' Competition*
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Re: Deepest Desire
20th Apr 2014 4:53pm
A very soulful write.. I feel this one in my bones.. good luck in the comp. :) with love Crim
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26th Apr 2014 7:46pm
Thank you Lissie:)
Its always good to see your name on my upsdates page.
Xx
Its always good to see your name on my upsdates page.
Xx
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2014 8:27pm
This is great work, powerful!
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