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Summertime sadness (The end has come)
Knocking back the whiskey , i feel the burn deep in my throat ,
I let out an impatient sigh ,
My heart thumps , my chest crumbling into a pit of glass as it cannot take the force of heartbreak any longer ,
No more words , this sinister curse has finally defeated me
The tears shall fall ,
And now my thoughts will subside and finally drift into an eternal and black abyss .
I let out an impatient sigh ,
My heart thumps , my chest crumbling into a pit of glass as it cannot take the force of heartbreak any longer ,
No more words , this sinister curse has finally defeated me
The tears shall fall ,
And now my thoughts will subside and finally drift into an eternal and black abyss .
Published 19th Apr 2014
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19th Apr 2014 4:57pm
19th Apr 2014 5:06pm
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20th Apr 2014 8:52pm
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25th Apr 2014 10:45pm
It is a nice distant poem.
Although the circumstance does not seem to change, the poem is hopeful.
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Just come to view the black abyss as friend and spend winter playing triominoes because that abyss is in the shape of an upside-down equilateral triangle.
Although the circumstance does not seem to change, the poem is hopeful.
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Just come to view the black abyss as friend and spend winter playing triominoes because that abyss is in the shape of an upside-down equilateral triangle.
25th Apr 2014 10:51pm
13th Jul 2014 8:49am
You've chosen some fine words here to write this one. Cool imagery, I must say. Somewhat short but a real good one.
13th Jul 2014 10:50am
