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Not One
I once heard a rumor
That this man loved me.
I knew it wasn't true,
But I still let him fuck me.
Even knelt down in front of him;
Pretended to love him.
I knew I wasn't the only one
To him.
And that was okay
Because he wasn't the only one
To me.
Months went by
Of morning sucks
And late night fucks;
Even once or twice
I cooked.
Still then I refused to commit,
Relationships only stay happy
For as long as one can submit.
Everything dies
And love is not to omit.
That this man loved me.
I knew it wasn't true,
But I still let him fuck me.
Even knelt down in front of him;
Pretended to love him.
I knew I wasn't the only one
To him.
And that was okay
Because he wasn't the only one
To me.
Months went by
Of morning sucks
And late night fucks;
Even once or twice
I cooked.
Still then I refused to commit,
Relationships only stay happy
For as long as one can submit.
Everything dies
And love is not to omit.
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Re: Not One
16th Apr 2014 10:35pm
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16th Apr 2014 11:10pm
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16th Apr 2014 11:49pm
Re: Not One
16th Apr 2014 11:16pm
You deserve a guy who treats u right right and u only. Just sayin.
;) you're worth more than that, dont sell your self out and settle for anything less u deserve
buddy is an idiot. Thats my take anyway. ;)
;) you're worth more than that, dont sell your self out and settle for anything less u deserve
buddy is an idiot. Thats my take anyway. ;)
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17th Apr 2014 00:04am
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17th Apr 2014 00:02am
Yeah, I try. As long as you know what you're doing you can lead what ever life you want.
Re: Not One
17th Apr 2014 3:28pm
True freedom has no boundaries, thus let us live for if I shipwreck I will sink knowing life.
Wonderful read
Wonderful read
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Re: Not One
21st Apr 2014 7:55pm
WOW You really kept it 100 with this sweets!!
Great write and read!!
Straight Awesome!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write and read!!
Straight Awesome!!!
Sir Lancelott
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Re: Not One
27th May 2014 00:12am
love is not having the pressure of not omitting.
these men come and go, as does many things in life. but it will catch you by surprise one day, when love is so clearly there in all spectrums, it is almost like you have known it all along, but just never noticed it at the corner of your eye. like the song you grew up listening to without paying attention to it. ten years down the line, you hear it and you know every single word. simplest way of putting it, i guess!
these men come and go, as does many things in life. but it will catch you by surprise one day, when love is so clearly there in all spectrums, it is almost like you have known it all along, but just never noticed it at the corner of your eye. like the song you grew up listening to without paying attention to it. ten years down the line, you hear it and you know every single word. simplest way of putting it, i guess!
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Re: Not One
12th Jun 2014 5:54pm
Madi I'm really liking your ink. Your writing speaks to me of the truths I've seen and lived. Good write.
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