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Cuts That Don't Bleed
In the depths
you left me
silence deafening
speaking volumes
without uttering a word
you left me
silence deafening
speaking volumes
without uttering a word
Published 13th Apr 2014
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13th Apr 2014 5:03pm
silent rebuke often hurts so much more than screaming insults. i hear this one loud and clear Brenda xo
13th Apr 2014 5:18pm
yes I hate the silent treatment more than anything else thank you beautiful Katja for getting this write :) with love Brenda
13th Apr 2014 5:27pm
Some folks are easily struck dumb :D
Pitch Perfect delivery here Dear Crim!!!
Pitch Perfect delivery here Dear Crim!!!
13th Apr 2014 5:30pm
this person is quite intelligent and beloved thus the pain of it thank you kind Soul for visiting me :) with love Crim
Anonymous
13th Apr 2014 6:25pm
I hate getting the "silent treatment". This is absolutely perfect. :]
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13th Apr 2014 6:50pm
Silence can most definitely scream the loudest and cut the deepest.
Such a wonderful piece beautiful lady. :)
Such a wonderful piece beautiful lady. :)
13th Apr 2014 6:58pm
thank you Lovely Magdalena I'm feeling a little hurt but then I don't know how my friend is feeling they may just have there own problems going on.. thank you again with love Crim :)
13th Apr 2014 7:05pm
Sorry to read that Crim. I can totally understand how painful the silence can be and how it is like being left in the dark. I have had it done to me and it's not nice.
Take care of you. :) x
Take care of you. :) x
13th Apr 2014 7:09pm
13th Apr 2014 7:55pm
Lovely Lady, short and concise.
Courtesy and communication are golden, rather than silence.
Courtesy and communication are golden, rather than silence.
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13th Apr 2014 8:46pm
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13th Apr 2014 9:52pm
I hope karma is kind to this person.. it may be my bad karma I'm experiencing thank you :) with love Crim
13th Apr 2014 10:19pm
Hum, I've felt the sting of such wounds. Masters of silence... internal bleeding. I feel you.
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14th Apr 2014 5:26am
...sometimes, silence speak volumes, and if we listen closely, we can hear the story...Xo
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14th Apr 2014 6:06am
Aaaawwww Crim, this makes me sad... I pray you don't
feel like you did anything to deserve it... Very touching ink spill
feel like you did anything to deserve it... Very touching ink spill
thank you Poe but I since talked with this person I was thinking the silence was because of my crazy last post but it wasn't I'm so self centered at times the world doesn't revolve around me end rambling.. thank you for being here Poe :) with love Crim
14th Apr 2014 7:09am
I would rather the deafening insult of words than the calculating barb of silence; it leaves the wounded to the madness of self analysis. Perfectly scripted xx
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14th Apr 2014 4:53pm
I don't know I just seem to dislike it more.. thank you for the visit and RL add :) with love Crim
14th Apr 2014 2:48pm
The torture of leaving us with our own mind, A joker within us constantly creating chaos. Cruel indeed.
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15th Apr 2014 12:27pm
Crim, new to your greatly expressive pages...n I stand taken by this short deep piece of affecting words. true...the depths, when in there and left ..one is dazed n comatic to cope further .The title is a poetry by itself! deep-felt.
15th Apr 2014 3:40pm
thank you kindly Uma for visiting my pages and leaving such a gracious comment :) with love Crim
18th Apr 2014 8:29am
I know this silence. It puts a whole in your soul and heart. Always wondering why it's this way. Can relate all too well. Xo :)
18th Apr 2014 2:47pm
thank you for the visit lovely one only sorry you can relate.. with love Crim :)
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