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"How It Really Feels"......(my treatise on making love to you)
(....the superheating of the her air condensing and cooling causing the torrential flow of "RAIN" from her sable "clouds") from the Music Man's Hedonistic Theory of Lust and Love
Squirting
exploding
trembling cold-chills
pulsing
repeatedly
depleting the need inside of you
riding the rush outside of me
splashing
deep inside
the walls
of this house of pleasure
bodies together
seemingly forever
flammable liquids spilled,
inside the “fire we make”
yet cool running still......
...oozing
golden honey
copiously
from
inside
your hive
rich and alive
coating my
tingling
electric
pleasure
unmeasured......
…..in that moment, "we belong together"
no words adequately convey
this transfiguration
the amalgamation
a digital flow
my one,
your zero
velocity squared
reality
virtually
impaired
ethereal screams and moans
deafening, sensual overtones
in the night
loving you right….
…..rubbing
brushing
the fullness of
lips
silky-wet
going down
slow motions,
sucking ,
licking
erotic, melodic sounds
killing u softly ….
tweaking
pulling
kneading
pumping
harder strokes,
slipping
dipping
deeper
longer
the intensity growing stronger
the “coming” is better than what has ever been
the explosion
the recoil
the release deep within
the aqueous sounds
in love's closing moments......
“.....let's do it again”
Published 11th Apr 2014
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11th Apr 2014 7:35pm
11th Apr 2014 7:55pm
....glad to be able to adequately warm you on this beautiful spring day : )
Thank You !
Thank You !
11th Apr 2014 8:26pm
.....wondering if 'eyes' can climax,
because I’m light-headed, exhausted and feeling satisfied after reading this. 'How it really feels, huh?' smh... You and your pen need to quit playing. ;) Xoxo Rain loves~
because I’m light-headed, exhausted and feeling satisfied after reading this. 'How it really feels, huh?' smh... You and your pen need to quit playing. ;) Xoxo Rain loves~
"..........wondering if 'eyes' can climax,(I like that)
....I’m light-headed, exhausted and feeling satisfied after reading this. 'How it really feels, huh?' smh... You and your pen need to quit playing. ;) Xoxo Rain loves~"
Yes, that's exactly how it feels to me everytime we....Oooooo (had to steal that from J.J.)
...one of those questions *asked* that I could never get an answer to. Now you know ; )
ps. I ain't playing 777 9311 LOL
....I’m light-headed, exhausted and feeling satisfied after reading this. 'How it really feels, huh?' smh... You and your pen need to quit playing. ;) Xoxo Rain loves~"
Yes, that's exactly how it feels to me everytime we....Oooooo (had to steal that from J.J.)
...one of those questions *asked* that I could never get an answer to. Now you know ; )
ps. I ain't playing 777 9311 LOL
"Let' s do it again" -- reading this poem makes me wanna do it over and over again -- thank you Mr.M........ ;)
A winner erotically as well as stylistically..... I loved every superbly crafted word --super hot.... ♡♡♡ and the pic is pretty hot too --oh my!!!
A winner erotically as well as stylistically..... I loved every superbly crafted word --super hot.... ♡♡♡ and the pic is pretty hot too --oh my!!!
"Let' s do it again" -- reading this poem makes me wanna do it over and over again --"
Exactly : ) Glad you enjoyed this one
...and yes that pic does give one pause
Exactly : ) Glad you enjoyed this one
...and yes that pic does give one pause
12th Apr 2014 6:59am
"depleting the need inside of you
riding the rush outside of me" fav line..this was all kinds of sultry..Splendid Ink Mr Ink...enjoyed!!
riding the rush outside of me" fav line..this was all kinds of sultry..Splendid Ink Mr Ink...enjoyed!!
12th Apr 2014 7:00am
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