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Dream Away
The pre cum is the tell all sign
my resistance is gone
just as boiling water first bubbles
before the energy exchange
Attempts have been made at some semblance
of suave cool collected behavior but not factored
was how the nights and days of fantasies masturbations
and your actual presence has made my body respond
Like the breeze that flows in the air
the swell that rides through ocean waters
the electric charge that powers a myriad of devices
this unmet demand of mine has become second nature
Now the next phase rests with you...
my resistance is gone
just as boiling water first bubbles
before the energy exchange
Attempts have been made at some semblance
of suave cool collected behavior but not factored
was how the nights and days of fantasies masturbations
and your actual presence has made my body respond
Like the breeze that flows in the air
the swell that rides through ocean waters
the electric charge that powers a myriad of devices
this unmet demand of mine has become second nature
Now the next phase rests with you...
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re: Re: Dream Away
9th Apr 2014 3:46pm
thanks---it always helps when what was in the mind sparks a desirable outcome in reality :)
Re: Dream Away
9th Apr 2014 3:59pm
...yeah, that pre-cum is a liquid sign that testify the body is heated. Nice....Xo
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9th Apr 2014 5:21pm
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2014 1:53am
Like button pressed! Well penned, Jazz Man:)
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Re: Dream Away
16th Apr 2014 2:55pm
This falls below your 12 inches stick, but the heat is still beyond one's imaginations...good read!
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17th Apr 2014 12:22pm
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27th May 2014 1:40am
I love the imagery that evolves from what I could almost perceive as a pause in time, a freeze frame. Her next move is when the play button is pressed. I particular loved the lines :
the swell that rides through ocean waters
the electric charge that powers a myriad of devices
the swell that rides through ocean waters
the electric charge that powers a myriad of devices
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27th May 2014 2:27am
Hmm you added a flavor that if it was part of my thinking was certainly not verbalized. Thanks for the insight.