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another moment (short nothings)
Looking deep into the horizon
Reflecting ocean sparkles by sunset
And I can feel your love sweep through my world
Just another moment in love.
Reflecting ocean sparkles by sunset
And I can feel your love sweep through my world
Just another moment in love.
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Re: another moment (short nothings)
Anonymous
9th Apr 2014 3:44am
Beautiful! Few words....big impact on senses. Luv it! Xo :)
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Re: another moment (short nothings)
9th Apr 2014 4:17am
*clapping excitedly* :)
...so happy to see ink from you hon. This is lovely....Xo
...so happy to see ink from you hon. This is lovely....Xo
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Re: another moment (short nothings)
28th Aug 2014 2:25pm
This is light and whimsical-ish and floats on the oceans surface--
Not a word of this sinks below the waves. Because there doesn't seem to be anything more then a calm thought here, it just sits in the moment, waiting.
It's simple and bright~
But is there any deeper meaning (despite it being stuck on the waves)?
I would guess not, because it's just short nothings--But what what your inspiration for it, at least?
Not a word of this sinks below the waves. Because there doesn't seem to be anything more then a calm thought here, it just sits in the moment, waiting.
It's simple and bright~
But is there any deeper meaning (despite it being stuck on the waves)?
I would guess not, because it's just short nothings--But what what your inspiration for it, at least?
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28th Aug 2014 6:51pm
Hey Key...thanks for reading and thanks for a cool comment...well this ink was inspired when I was at the beach and thinking of love...spur of the moment thing lolz...thanks again