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Loveseen
Let my eyes savoir the flesh before me
Watching candle light cascading shadows upon your skin
Breathtaking alabaster in shades of wanting
Tones that wet my lip to press upon
Restraining I will have to lick the air you are in
Exposed to my naked thoughts
Innocence stripped down to please
Laces of my tongue bind you
Forming you to my needful desire
Stroking the submissive you fall with open knees
Your knees are my pedestal
A sacred gift entrusted into my hands
A treasure of rare sorts
My queen deserves my wrath
And my hardened commands
Imprints of my love will welt you
Shackle you to my loving embrace
I promise to hold you to my pleasure
As my slut you will obey me
In pain, pleasure and disgrace
For today I wish to only watch
Sooth me with your beauty
Adore me in your silent submission
For only our breathes to dance around us
As we love in harmony
Watching candle light cascading shadows upon your skin
Breathtaking alabaster in shades of wanting
Tones that wet my lip to press upon
Restraining I will have to lick the air you are in
Exposed to my naked thoughts
Innocence stripped down to please
Laces of my tongue bind you
Forming you to my needful desire
Stroking the submissive you fall with open knees
Your knees are my pedestal
A sacred gift entrusted into my hands
A treasure of rare sorts
My queen deserves my wrath
And my hardened commands
Imprints of my love will welt you
Shackle you to my loving embrace
I promise to hold you to my pleasure
As my slut you will obey me
In pain, pleasure and disgrace
For today I wish to only watch
Sooth me with your beauty
Adore me in your silent submission
For only our breathes to dance around us
As we love in harmony
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8th Apr 2014 7:48pm
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8th Apr 2014 8:27pm
...so sensually inked. I love the way your pen glides across the page in this piece, Soul! Love this hon...Xo
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9th Apr 2014 12:56pm
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8th Apr 2014 9:53pm
Mmmm totally got lost in the beautiful exchange of trust and honor in this one. I love it!
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9th Apr 2014 12:58pm
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8th Apr 2014 11:26pm
"Let my eyes savoir the flesh before me
Watching candle light cascading shadows upon your skin
Breathtaking alabaster in shades of wanting "
mmmmmm sensual write..enjoyable read ..and thoughts for later imaginings :)
Watching candle light cascading shadows upon your skin
Breathtaking alabaster in shades of wanting "
mmmmmm sensual write..enjoyable read ..and thoughts for later imaginings :)
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9th Apr 2014 1:00pm
Domore,I am touched by your comments, I hope the pleasures of the night run wild for you.
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9th Apr 2014 00:55am
Sultry... My Dear Sir.. I do believe you have stroked the philosophers stone. Love it!!
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9th Apr 2014 1:09pm
Tis the cold stone hands of a mans touch that enchants deep inside a woman's soul turning her skin a shimmering gold.
Always grateful for your amazing comments, thank you
Always grateful for your amazing comments, thank you
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Anonymous
9th Apr 2014 1:08am
Sweet Soul.....such a gracious write of luv in action. Beautiful, sensual and sexy. Very much enjoyed! :)
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9th Apr 2014 1:10pm
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9th Apr 2014 9:58am
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9th Apr 2014 1:03pm
so many exquisite lines, it's impossible to quote only a few that stand out from this sensual feast for the senses.
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9th Apr 2014 1:15pm
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