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Breatheyou
I want to know that you’re there,
But don’t stand too close (otherwise things may become real)-
I do not know myself enough to know this fiend I’ve become.
Just stand there. Yes.
I can smell you (But never breathe you)
I can feel you (But never touch you)
Published 7th Apr 2014
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7th Apr 2014 8:14am
7th Apr 2014 8:24am
Thankyou louisspindle, i will take that into consideration for future poems!However, i use brackets in my works to physically depict my exploration of the relationship between the spoken word and the real truth of situations. If you would like another (longer) example of this technique, please feel free to look at my poem Sleep-(silence) :)
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8th Apr 2014 9:50pm
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