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Ink Cum Dreams
Knowing your high standards
i'll just suck a cock instead of talking
but would it be alright if I write with my cunt?
I need to get my apathetic thoughts
down on paper before they escape
my cum soaked brain
so scrape what's left of me
from the walls because I can guarantee
this won't make a bit of sense
an anti-anthem to your genius
fucking life scares the shit out of me
shading in an alcohol haze
writing sober sucks balls
well I enjoy that, so bad metaphor
I'm feeling kind of deviant
I would love to crawl inside your head
lick your psyche and see what you taste like
I'd imagine you'd be a bit acidic burning my pallet
make my way to your cock
swirl your cum on my tongue
see if it tastes like ink
swallow you down
seeing visions
and just trip awhile
i'll just suck a cock instead of talking
but would it be alright if I write with my cunt?
I need to get my apathetic thoughts
down on paper before they escape
my cum soaked brain
so scrape what's left of me
from the walls because I can guarantee
this won't make a bit of sense
an anti-anthem to your genius
fucking life scares the shit out of me
shading in an alcohol haze
writing sober sucks balls
well I enjoy that, so bad metaphor
I'm feeling kind of deviant
I would love to crawl inside your head
lick your psyche and see what you taste like
I'd imagine you'd be a bit acidic burning my pallet
make my way to your cock
swirl your cum on my tongue
see if it tastes like ink
swallow you down
seeing visions
and just trip awhile
Published 7th Apr 2014
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7th Apr 2014 4:19am
your mind fascinates me... your poems make me wonder what in the world goes on in your head all day.. but I love this piece... :)
7th Apr 2014 5:15am
thank you beautiful Kitty I sometimes wonder about what goes on in my head lol :) with love Crim
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7th Apr 2014 4:22am
Whew Crim.....you got yourself rocking sexy in this one. Mmmmm! So many great lines. Fantastic! Take a bow girl you earned it. :)
7th Apr 2014 5:16am
7th Apr 2014 4:30am
Well you need not ask nor wonder, just take it babe, take all u want lol...seriously, this was seriously HOTT!! :)
Loved it!
Loved it!
7th Apr 2014 5:17am
7th Apr 2014 4:55am
always trippin w/your logic, Crim. set us on fire, so we can write deviant poetry...
7th Apr 2014 5:18am
i'll do my best John ;) thank you for your visit putting a smile on my face.. with love Crim
7th Apr 2014 6:06am
Lovely Crim, followed your instructions and scraped ... it makes perfect sense. Or, you've illuminated my madness. :)
Either way, sexy greatness! BRAVO!
Either way, sexy greatness! BRAVO!
7th Apr 2014 6:14am
VP so glad you're back you've been missed thank you for getting me and the add to you RL you made my night :) with love Crim
7th Apr 2014 8:00am
i think many of us have this little "problem" caused by acute poetry addiction.
love the way your mind works xo
love the way your mind works xo
7th Apr 2014 10:40am
thank you beautiful Mia for getting this crazy poem of mine :) with love Brenda
7th Apr 2014 9:58am
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7th Apr 2014 10:20am
Daring write Crimsin! Very erotic also and for this reason it doesn't belong to the miscellaneous category! Please move it to the erotic section, will ya?!
7th Apr 2014 10:42am
thank you Opheliac moved as advised I hope your day is going great :) with love Crim
7th Apr 2014 10:44am
Thank you very much for moving the poem Crimsin.
My day's brighten after reading your poetry. I hope yours is going just as great!
My day's brighten after reading your poetry. I hope yours is going just as great!
7th Apr 2014 10:49am
thank you Opheliac you made my very early morning with your beautiful comment.. with love Crim :)
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7th Apr 2014 2:33pm
Hints of addiction, chaos, wild behavior throughout this write. Captured most profoundly is your passion and your biggest addiction *poetry*
8th Apr 2014 7:53pm
7th Apr 2014 2:45pm
Sometimes you leave me speachless with your words.... excellent write!! Truly Enjoyed!!... with love and respect.. xoxo domore
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12th Apr 2014 2:38pm
You Know...I'm having problems fighting a seduction problem and you're not helping...
perfection its all I can say my dear...
Perfection.
perfection its all I can say my dear...
Perfection.
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