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Shall We
Shall we go back in time
Show her again,
How she's mine
The the picture perfect scenes
And dance the night away in our dreams
Shall we be teens wIth young and dumb
Hold hands In publIc
And hug untIl we're numb
Marry each other out of fun
And let this endless trance
Never be done
Shall we play in the park like little kids
Ride all the rides we've already rid
For old times sake,
Shall we say hearts a treasure
And continue to dig
Shall we be toddlers again
Call each other icky every now and then
Tease each other and have play dates
Promise to marry each other one day
Shall we go back in time
Show the world how I'm yours
And your mine
As our atitudes change
Published 6th Apr 2014
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6th Apr 2014 10:51am
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27th Apr 2014 11:28pm
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4th May 2014 7:46pm
Very nice read. However, it is dated too recent to qualify for the competition. The entry must be older than the starting date on the comp... hold on, lemme check the exact date.
4th May 2014 7:49pm
My apologies, it does qualify. By a long shot, actually... Well, I can't wait to pit it up against the other entries, I can see it will go far in the judging.
30th Jul 2014 2:01am
Beautiful!
I really love the flow of ur piece.
I'll be using a line of this piece, in the competition, Allusion, by jolais,...
It's inspired me. ;-)
Darker
I really love the flow of ur piece.
I'll be using a line of this piece, in the competition, Allusion, by jolais,...
It's inspired me. ;-)
Darker
