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Torn
Ripped Me Apart,
Without You Knowing It,
Ripped Me Apart,
Without Me Showing It..
My Body Shows No Signs Of Wear,
My Mind In Shreds,
My Heart Bears The Tear..
Torn At The Seams,
Wasted,
Desolated..
My Feelings Treated With Contempt,
Used,
Borrowed,
Abused,
Then Destroyed..
A Queue Now Forming,
Friends,
Family,
Swarming,
I Lay Crushed,
Battered,
My Heart Decayed,
My Friendship Betrayed..
Without You Knowing It,
Ripped Me Apart,
Without Me Showing It..
My Body Shows No Signs Of Wear,
My Mind In Shreds,
My Heart Bears The Tear..
Torn At The Seams,
Wasted,
Desolated..
My Feelings Treated With Contempt,
Used,
Borrowed,
Abused,
Then Destroyed..
A Queue Now Forming,
Friends,
Family,
Swarming,
I Lay Crushed,
Battered,
My Heart Decayed,
My Friendship Betrayed..
Published 10th Mar 2011
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10th Mar 2011 10:39pm
This poem is immensely deep. I enjoyed it because of the emotion it portrayed and such. Its poems like these that I enjoy reading. great job! ^.^
10th Mar 2011 11:00pm
Thank you so much for your comments.
All the experiances I write about are deep I'm afraid, I may suprise everyone and write a happy poem one day :o)
All the experiances I write about are deep I'm afraid, I may suprise everyone and write a happy poem one day :o)
11th Mar 2011 6:05am
11th Mar 2011 7:32am
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11th Mar 2011 1:06am
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11th Mar 2011 1:24am
I really like your poems they say who you are and what your going threw i like that its the same with me
11th Mar 2011 7:35am
Thank you for taking the time to comment.
And thats why I'm him to express, and find other people who can relate :o)
And thats why I'm him to express, and find other people who can relate :o)
