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You'll Get
You don’t want more
from me,
than what I can give,
My heart’s not here.
So you’ll get
Nothing emotional,
or lasting longer,
Than the time it takes to
Kiss, squeeze
Hug and Tug clothes
Tease, Taste
Stroke, Suck, then Fuck
I’ll get mine,
So will you.
I’ve gotta go
Time’s up
from me,
than what I can give,
My heart’s not here.
So you’ll get
Nothing emotional,
or lasting longer,
Than the time it takes to
Kiss, squeeze
Hug and Tug clothes
Tease, Taste
Stroke, Suck, then Fuck
I’ll get mine,
So will you.
I’ve gotta go
Time’s up
Published 27th Mar 2014
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I love the concise notion of your writing.
This is perfect unemotional lust.
I dig it
This is perfect unemotional lust.
I dig it
27th Mar 2014 9:29pm
Poet..I stepped out of my comfort zone for this one.. :) was trying something a little different :) Thank you soo much for always encouraging words.. with my deepest respect xoxo domore
27th Mar 2014 9:54pm
27th Mar 2014 10:50pm
Thank you Sir :) I appreciate the read and comment :) with respect.. domore
27th Mar 2014 10:03pm
27th Mar 2014 10:52pm
Crim, my friend, I am ever honored with your thoughts. So glad you liked this :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
Anonymous
27th Mar 2014 11:32pm
This sounds very common in today's society. I hope I'm not misinterpreting. Well written and so very true. I've felt this way before. You stepped outside your comfort zone and created an excellent piece! Well done!
28th Mar 2014 5:06am
Thank you Donovan :) for the read and the compliments within your comment...I am honored.
with respect ..domore
ps I believe you indeed, interpreted correctly :)
with respect ..domore
ps I believe you indeed, interpreted correctly :)
Anonymous
28th Mar 2014 00:29am
If that's all he gets....I'm sure he will be back for less again and again. LOL!!! Great write! Xo :
28th Mar 2014 5:08am
Thank you Lovely Flower, you make me smile with your comment...lol with love and respect..xoxo domore
4th Apr 2014 1:45am
that was very professionally done. gotta stay on schedule.
seriously good writing...
seriously good writing...
4th Apr 2014 3:07pm
