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The Manuscript
I am intimidated just a little bit
by this manuscript I must admit
the one that I'm supposed to write
to take off in best-selling flight
yet I hold my own in poetry
never worry about the glory to be
can even finish a short story
knowing that your eyes will see
so what is it about this manuscript
that has me dreading to work on it
I think I worry about your appraising looks
knowing you write so many excellent books
but your sweet love and cherished insight
are slowly taking away this plight
and being worth their weight in gold
I will tell the story needing to be told......
by this manuscript I must admit
the one that I'm supposed to write
to take off in best-selling flight
yet I hold my own in poetry
never worry about the glory to be
can even finish a short story
knowing that your eyes will see
so what is it about this manuscript
that has me dreading to work on it
I think I worry about your appraising looks
knowing you write so many excellent books
but your sweet love and cherished insight
are slowly taking away this plight
and being worth their weight in gold
I will tell the story needing to be told......
Published 26th Mar 2014
| Edited 27th Mar 2014
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26th Mar 2014 00:46am
27th Mar 2014 5:05am
Thank you darling -- I think it's you who are awesome for being such a loyal fan of my poetry...... ;) ♡♡♡
26th Mar 2014 1:20am
Write as you feel it, as you see it, as you know it to be. Your words have never failed. You write splendid. Xo :)
27th Mar 2014 5:08am
Thank you flowergirl as always for lending me such
encouraging support -- you are a true friend, and I am slowly getting ready for this huge (for me anyways) undertaking.... :) ♡♡♡
encouraging support -- you are a true friend, and I am slowly getting ready for this huge (for me anyways) undertaking.... :) ♡♡♡
27th Mar 2014 5:37am
if you have freer sex
then a poets mind opens
like a sun flower
ask any flower
u r not inexperienced all know
then a poets mind opens
like a sun flower
ask any flower
u r not inexperienced all know
27th Mar 2014 6:25am
R u trying to tell me something here? ;)
It 's , true what you say that mind-blowing sex is a
fantastic gateway to creativity, and although I consider
myself to be a fairly creative person, I could definitely use
a boost especially with regard to this "manuscript", so I will keep ur advice in mind..... :)
It 's , true what you say that mind-blowing sex is a
fantastic gateway to creativity, and although I consider
myself to be a fairly creative person, I could definitely use
a boost especially with regard to this "manuscript", so I will keep ur advice in mind..... :)
27th Mar 2014 3:54pm
Anonymous
27th Mar 2014 5:42am
This is superb! Bravo!
Thank you very much for your comment -- for some reason I started to edit this piece obsessively after I first posted it here, and now I finally like the flow of it..... :) ♡♡♡
