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With you..
Warmth surrounds me as I ease myself in.
Fingers lightly dancing across heated skin.
I close my eyes and let my mind wander.
Tension leaving, replaced by needs much stronger.
Steady waves caressing every shadow and curve;
paying homage to the places you once
lingered with hands and mouth.
Replaying scenes from memory, I follow the path
your traveled; from north to south.
One hand resting at my breast the other reaching
further down, arriving at apex of my sex.
Both teasing and playing while softly serenading
my bodies innate reflex.
Mother Natures rhythm thrumming from deep within;
with knowing nimble fingers deftly slipping in.
Riding crests of pleasure with each deliberate stroke.
Echoing sighs of passion serving only to provoke.
Steam rises, pulse pounds, breathing hitched;
the steady tide rolls around me, as I fall over cliff.
Then with languid grace I rise and cool;
flushed skin, ragged beat of heart,
damning times too few.
While we no longer are together, I'll always enjoy;
my evening bathes with you.
Fingers lightly dancing across heated skin.
I close my eyes and let my mind wander.
Tension leaving, replaced by needs much stronger.
Steady waves caressing every shadow and curve;
paying homage to the places you once
lingered with hands and mouth.
Replaying scenes from memory, I follow the path
your traveled; from north to south.
One hand resting at my breast the other reaching
further down, arriving at apex of my sex.
Both teasing and playing while softly serenading
my bodies innate reflex.
Mother Natures rhythm thrumming from deep within;
with knowing nimble fingers deftly slipping in.
Riding crests of pleasure with each deliberate stroke.
Echoing sighs of passion serving only to provoke.
Steam rises, pulse pounds, breathing hitched;
the steady tide rolls around me, as I fall over cliff.
Then with languid grace I rise and cool;
flushed skin, ragged beat of heart,
damning times too few.
While we no longer are together, I'll always enjoy;
my evening bathes with you.
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Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 1:07pm
this sensual and erotic writing at its finest.
you have style and tender grace
you have style and tender grace
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re: Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 4:43pm
Thank you Poet.. I blush in light of your comment :) I am very glad you enjoyed.. with deep respect xoxo domore
ps Many thanks for the RL add. I am honored.
ps Many thanks for the RL add. I am honored.
Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 2:49pm
re: Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 4:48pm
Thank you my strong and resilient friend! Brenda, I am ever humbled by your words. with love and respect.. xoxo domore
Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 7:20pm
Memories and a nice hot bath. Oh yes!!! Sexy and beautiful write. Enjoyed! :)
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re: Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 9:11pm
Thank you Lovely Flower! I am soo glad you enjoyed :) with love and respect...xoxo domore
Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 8:48pm
re: Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 9:17pm
Thank you kind sir!! I am so glad you enjoyed :) with much respect..xoxo domore
Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 9:52pm
Title leaves reader to find out that the title is completed "...in spirit."
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re: Re: With you..
23rd Mar 2014 10:04pm
Indeed it does Solomon :) In truth I did not know how to title this...so used my last words...
thank you for reading and for your comment..
with respect domore
thank you for reading and for your comment..
with respect domore
Re: With you..
Anonymous
24th Mar 2014 2:07pm
Very nicely penned :)

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re: Re: With you..
24th Mar 2014 2:20pm
Thank you Quanawana :) I appreciate you reading and your comment :) with respect...domore
Re: With you..
24th Mar 2014 3:08pm
re: Re: With you..
24th Mar 2014 3:53pm
Poetikmind... I'm so very glad you think so. :) this was my first attempt at.. and wanted to paint an image that was tastefully tantalizing :) with respect.. domore
Re: With you..
1st May 2014 5:39pm
"Steady waves caressing every shadow and curve" <melting thoughts
Sensual write, pulling the reader along with your fingers teasing our senses in your wetness, this ink will never dry.
Sensual write, pulling the reader along with your fingers teasing our senses in your wetness, this ink will never dry.
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re: Re: With you..
1st May 2014 6:40pm
Awakened, you honor me with your read and humble me with your words.. this was my first attempt at writing something sensual and erotic..I am pleased to know...I achieved a measure of success... with deepest respect..xoxo domore