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His X
The first time I saw her at the feed and seed back home.
It didn't take but one good look, I had to make her my own.
I saw him looking at me when I was looking at her.
Just how he felt about it I wasn't quit sure.
I knew he knew what I had on my mind.
Cause it's hard to hide the truth when you're two of a kind.
She sure looks good and she sure is something.
She'll put a smile on your face when you see her coming.
She don't wear a bra, don't nothin sag
She's got a tight rear end, don't nothin drag
The excitement on my face was the same that he once had.
What makes one man happy can make the other man sad.
Don't take me wrong cause I know how he feels.
She might be his X but the facts are for real.
Tonight I'll be riding her and he'll be out of luck.
She'll be his X but, now, she's gonna be my pick up truck.
She sure looks good and she sure is something.
She'll put a smile on your face when you see her coming
She don't wear a bra, don't nothin sag
She's got a tight rear end, don't nothin drag
It didn't take but one good look, I had to make her my own.
I saw him looking at me when I was looking at her.
Just how he felt about it I wasn't quit sure.
I knew he knew what I had on my mind.
Cause it's hard to hide the truth when you're two of a kind.
She sure looks good and she sure is something.
She'll put a smile on your face when you see her coming.
She don't wear a bra, don't nothin sag
She's got a tight rear end, don't nothin drag
The excitement on my face was the same that he once had.
What makes one man happy can make the other man sad.
Don't take me wrong cause I know how he feels.
She might be his X but the facts are for real.
Tonight I'll be riding her and he'll be out of luck.
She'll be his X but, now, she's gonna be my pick up truck.
She sure looks good and she sure is something.
She'll put a smile on your face when you see her coming
She don't wear a bra, don't nothin sag
She's got a tight rear end, don't nothin drag
Published 21st Mar 2014
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21st Mar 2014 3:10am
21st Mar 2014 3:24am
It's a true story, I thought it might make a good Country Song.
Thanks for the nice visit
Thanks for the nice visit
Anonymous
21st Mar 2014 6:16pm
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21st Mar 2014 7:47pm
"Keep on smillin through the rain, laughin at the pain
Rollin with the changes till the sun comes out again
Keep on smillin through the rain, laughin at the pain
Rollin with the changes, singin this refrain"
Your Smiles make me Smile. Thanks Bro.
Rollin with the changes till the sun comes out again
Keep on smillin through the rain, laughin at the pain
Rollin with the changes, singin this refrain"
Your Smiles make me Smile. Thanks Bro.
22nd Mar 2014 5:12pm
I love the irony of the poem, favorite part :
"Don't take me wrong cause I know how he feels.
She might be his X but the facts are for real.
Tonight I'll be riding her and he'll be out of luck.
She'll be his X but, now, she's gonna be my pick up truck."
"Don't take me wrong cause I know how he feels.
She might be his X but the facts are for real.
Tonight I'll be riding her and he'll be out of luck.
She'll be his X but, now, she's gonna be my pick up truck."
22nd Mar 2014 6:35pm
Thank You so much, Moonlite_nthe_Dark for shinning your lovely light on my bit of fun.
My whimsical attitude ain't that bad,
it provides good shelter when the weather's bad.
Here's to Irony and Fun, R T
My whimsical attitude ain't that bad,
it provides good shelter when the weather's bad.
Here's to Irony and Fun, R T
