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Words of truth (part one)
A spaghetti shit :
A massive log, coiled in despair
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A massive log, coiled in despair
...
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http://www.soundcloud.com/jc-luff
new songs have been posted
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Re: Words of truth (part one)
20th Mar 2014 7:13pm
Hahaha, wasn't expecting that!
Can't wait for part two - or should I say number two?
Can't wait for part two - or should I say number two?
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20th Mar 2014 7:28pm
I figure I should be able to pull another rabbit out of my hat over the weekend. Thanks for dropping by.
Re: Words of truth (part one)
21st Mar 2014 1:55am
Darnitt Luff, what kind of love poem is this?!
Was it coiled in a heart-shape or something?
Is it the love of spaghetti?
Or leaving a good imprint?
Was it coiled in a heart-shape or something?
Is it the love of spaghetti?
Or leaving a good imprint?
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re: Re: Words of truth (part one)
21st Mar 2014 4:11pm
This poem is a statement concerning the imminent decay of love and the after effects of a good meal
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26th Mar 2014 4:37am
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21st Mar 2014 4:12pm
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re: Re: Words of truth (part one)
22nd Mar 2014 1:36pm
Glad you enjoyed my latest text and thanks for reading... more words of truth coming soon