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Depravity
Depravity (Gravity the senryu edit)
floats above the world
searching for the perfect girl
now he fucks the sun
Written as part of "The 50 Sheds of Grey" (satire) challenge hosted by Miss Sub.
floats above the world
searching for the perfect girl
now he fucks the sun
Written as part of "The 50 Sheds of Grey" (satire) challenge hosted by Miss Sub.
Published 17th Mar 2014
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17th Mar 2014 11:06pm
18th Mar 2014 00:50am
18th Mar 2014 00:04am
18th Mar 2014 00:47am
18th Mar 2014 00:28am
(Ouch!) Sizzling....Senryu!
Insatiable lust...taken to the extreme--I'd say!:p
Insatiable lust...taken to the extreme--I'd say!:p
18th Mar 2014 00:49am
18th Mar 2014 2:08am
18th Mar 2014 5:11am
Thanks Rain, I wanted something short with a playful twist to tell the tale
19th Mar 2014 6:16am
Short and humorous. Definitely feels like there is a double meaning in there (though thay could be my own depravity). Either way I like it. :)
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
19th Mar 2014 10:12am
Yes you're right Indie there is another side to this coin ... His love life parallels the movie's title (which I've skewed) ...
I'm glad you took the time to read and comment, thank you
Salud
I'm glad you took the time to read and comment, thank you
Salud
