deepundergroundpoetry.com
Dancing clouds
Dreams
Are just that dreams...
or are they aspiration and thoughts..
striving to become a reality?
My reality is sometimes
Wanting, loving, and
holding on...
actually creating a
noose..
that is fit so snuggly..
that the littlest of movements
create a choke hold
My reality becomes stark...
a realization that by letting go..
I am really letting myself
BE,
This foresight will one day be my hindsight..
Goodbye dreams..till we meet again.
Are just that dreams...
or are they aspiration and thoughts..
striving to become a reality?
My reality is sometimes
Wanting, loving, and
holding on...
actually creating a
noose..
that is fit so snuggly..
that the littlest of movements
create a choke hold
My reality becomes stark...
a realization that by letting go..
I am really letting myself
BE,
This foresight will one day be my hindsight..
Goodbye dreams..till we meet again.
Published 17th Mar 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 9
reading list entries 0
comments 19
reads 895
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
17th Mar 2014 4:08pm
Is it that we sometimes fill our basket too full of things we wish for, to the point of worrying over what spills out until we can't focus on the simple joys in life?
17th Mar 2014 4:23pm
17th Mar 2014 9:11pm
"My reality is sometimes
Wanting, loving, and
holding on...
actually creating a
noose..
that is fit so snuggly..
that the littlest of movements
create a choke hold"<--all types of awesomeness right there. :) Shell, this one is Wonderful! Xo
Wanting, loving, and
holding on...
actually creating a
noose..
that is fit so snuggly..
that the littlest of movements
create a choke hold"<--all types of awesomeness right there. :) Shell, this one is Wonderful! Xo
18th Mar 2014 12:16pm
17th Mar 2014 10:56pm
I hate to think of dreams NOT happening becuz it is those that which we hold in to that do often makes a very hard life bearable enough to go. excellent ink lady :)
18th Mar 2014 12:17pm
Understand---for me sometimes those dreams...well they aren't ones to hold...
18th Mar 2014 8:17pm
19th Mar 2014 12:13pm
26th Mar 2014 1:04pm
This made me think I hope my dreams the good dreams
become reality and yours as well
become reality and yours as well
26th Mar 2014 1:09pm
27th Mar 2014 3:22am
27th Mar 2014 12:13pm
29th Mar 2014 7:39am
I like the deep meaning in this one. I can never say goodbye to my dreams though, since they are all I have.
16th Apr 2014 6:33am
I find that i rarely dream but daydream uncontrollably, but reading this makes me think & yes i think they are aspirations & desires from the mind!
Love this, kinda mystical to me!
Love this, kinda mystical to me!
16th Apr 2014 1:57pm
Thanks so much...not sure if I dream..never remember b them at least but I can space out daydream with the best of them!!! ;)
4th May 2014 11:01am
$one day at a time sweet Jesus,that's all am asking of you,,,,
Love your style mami!!!
xoxo!!!
Love your style mami!!!
xoxo!!!
5th May 2014 1:12pm
Gracias! Gracias! Thanks my dear again for the ink love!! Much appreciated!!
25th Jan 2016 5:48am
Thoughts as organisms yields the possibility of dreams reaching out to exist, be born free. When the present asks too much, we run ahead into dread sense. Choose too much of the now, feel the noose, because the status quo wants to remain so endowed.
26th Jan 2016 1:16pm
Love the additional lines/thoughts...running ahead tends to be oh so easy to do...sighhhhhh
