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Wild Nights Hazy Days
In between the
well worn ink stained
sheets of paper
lies my soul, my thoughts
immortalized for all to see
I've lost myself somewhere
tucked neatly away
amongst the pages
liquored days and nights
in a daze most the time
I continue to write
hoping in this maze
leads a path back home
to self discovery
I drink to have fun
then am slapped in the face
with the wanton way I act
partying with the twenty year olds
I feel young again
guess you could say I haven't grownup
to give up drinking seems
impossible with all the bonfires
raging parties thrown out here
nights spent flirting with the girls
because they like it
telling me they love me
outrageous is my behavior
holding on too long to a man
too young for me
in front of my loved one
he says he doesn't care
so long as he can watch
wild nights, hazy days
choking down my liquor
by morning light praying I keep it down
I can't say I haven't enjoyed myself
having loved it except
when I have to apologize in the morning
though everyone says "no worries"
we were all acting crazy last night
so I veil my shame and take another drink
then go at it again
wild sex acts performed
when my inhibitions are down
crazy days spent out here
in the country where
you would think nothing goes on
well worn ink stained
sheets of paper
lies my soul, my thoughts
immortalized for all to see
I've lost myself somewhere
tucked neatly away
amongst the pages
liquored days and nights
in a daze most the time
I continue to write
hoping in this maze
leads a path back home
to self discovery
I drink to have fun
then am slapped in the face
with the wanton way I act
partying with the twenty year olds
I feel young again
guess you could say I haven't grownup
to give up drinking seems
impossible with all the bonfires
raging parties thrown out here
nights spent flirting with the girls
because they like it
telling me they love me
outrageous is my behavior
holding on too long to a man
too young for me
in front of my loved one
he says he doesn't care
so long as he can watch
wild nights, hazy days
choking down my liquor
by morning light praying I keep it down
I can't say I haven't enjoyed myself
having loved it except
when I have to apologize in the morning
though everyone says "no worries"
we were all acting crazy last night
so I veil my shame and take another drink
then go at it again
wild sex acts performed
when my inhibitions are down
crazy days spent out here
in the country where
you would think nothing goes on
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Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
Anonymous
17th Mar 2014 10:54am
Wow, didn't think it was possible to read a poem that describes where I live! Great one! Really loved it!
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17th Mar 2014 11:03am
Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
Anonymous
17th Mar 2014 1:16pm
I really felt your pain in this one, and can relate to this on many levels. Beautifully written with clever verse and meter. The emotion grabs me in this :) love and light
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17th Mar 2014 6:11pm
Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 1:22pm
Chasing the setting sun, adorning the fires and having fun. Living life and taking our share and then some. Exploring the moon-lit madness with you is exhilarating. Guilt free mornings, now that's a beast we would like to tame. Much love this write. :)
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re: Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 6:12pm
It is fun beautiful Angel just got to tame my guilty feelings for indulging :) with love and respect Crim
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17th Mar 2014 1:54pm
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17th Mar 2014 6:13pm
Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 2:09pm
Fire blazing in the night sky
laughter echoes in the wind
smiles greeted with sultry lips
candle burning at both ends
Much to cherish in this life you live, sounds like the wild horse has the bit. Time to take the reins back. Ride the free spirit for its journey is splendid, do not let the journey take the spirit for a ride.
laughter echoes in the wind
smiles greeted with sultry lips
candle burning at both ends
Much to cherish in this life you live, sounds like the wild horse has the bit. Time to take the reins back. Ride the free spirit for its journey is splendid, do not let the journey take the spirit for a ride.
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re: Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 6:15pm
Soul thank you for your poem comments which I cherish and for your words of wisdom :) with love and respect Crim
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17th Mar 2014 6:15pm
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Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 5:43pm
Oh girl, your wild nights hazy days are actually fantasies many dream of, including me, without blaming it on the alcohol. <--insert humor. Most wouldn't call it 'shame', more like, fame to rich desire.:) ...though, I love the heart of your emotions in this piece. I felt the sadness of regretting the aftermath, after losing control. I understand this ink. Pen Respect, Crim...xo
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re: Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 6:18pm
it does indeed have it's fun sides but then morning comes and I'm like what the hell did I do? lol :) with love and respect Crim
Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 5:50pm
Lovely Crim, bold reality masterfully recorded. I've come to expect nothing less.
You have my admiration.
When harmful or addictive behaviors boil in my brain, I ask myself, often:
Who controls yoUr emotions?
Who chooses yoUr behavior?
You have my admiration.
When harmful or addictive behaviors boil in my brain, I ask myself, often:
Who controls yoUr emotions?
Who chooses yoUr behavior?
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re: Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 6:19pm
VP I do you're words of wisdom are treasured as well as your most gracious comment.. thank you with love and respect Crim :)
Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 9:21pm
I hate the hangover part of the wild parties ... lol
I love the ides behind this write ..
inspiration is everywhere even in the shit u n I are in its just that we need to find it and when u find that inspiration from that shit n u spit it out through ur craft u become sane ... sanity is insane .. stay young n cool enjoy life the way it comes ...
keep Rollin
cyanide..
I love the ides behind this write ..
inspiration is everywhere even in the shit u n I are in its just that we need to find it and when u find that inspiration from that shit n u spit it out through ur craft u become sane ... sanity is insane .. stay young n cool enjoy life the way it comes ...
keep Rollin
cyanide..
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re: Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 9:43pm
thank you Cyanide yes inspiration strikes from out wild lives :) i'll stay young and party with the best of them I'm down :) with love and respect Crim
Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
17th Mar 2014 11:17pm
Crimsin u have outdone urself with this poetic piece wow how u bare ur naked soul here letting ur natural beauty fall with brilliance in the wake or ur darkness. This is absolutely a divine write wow loving this big time
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re: Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
18th Mar 2014 4:46am
thank you Soul for your most gracious comments warming my heart :) with love and respect Crim
Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
18th Mar 2014 5:54am
shame is such wasted emotion, it's draining to wallow in it and it's little friend "guilt".
another beautiful write, Brenda.
p.s i don't think the twenty year olds will keep up with you lol
another beautiful write, Brenda.
p.s i don't think the twenty year olds will keep up with you lol
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re: Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
18th Mar 2014 6:13am
you're write Mia about the shame and guilt thing wise and beautiful lady thank you :)
I don't Mia I know some wild twenty year olds lol
with love and the deepest respect Brenda
I don't Mia I know some wild twenty year olds lol
with love and the deepest respect Brenda
Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
18th Mar 2014 5:56am
what you're showing me here is a very tearful write. it's great to have fun, just don't fn kill yourself w/it, okay?...
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re: Re: Wild Nights Hazy Days
18th Mar 2014 6:14am
thank you John I will learn to party with moderation :) with love and respect Crim