Big Sur California

i know this is posted as a love poem, but there's something beautifully sensual and erotic lingering between the lines.

simply gorgeous

thank you for your most gracious and lovely comment.. beautiful Mia with love and the deepest respect Brenda :)

Forgive my metaphor but this made me feel like I was in a coccoon. Safe, dreamy. What a beautiful poem Crim... and just what I needed today xoxoxox

thank you Rayne I'm happy to have put you in a dreamy state :) with love and respect Crim

feel the warmth & the thrill of your nude beach, Crim. it's a pleasant excursion...

thank you John for feeling me with this write :) with love and respect Crim

Ah, this is a wonderful story
of a bygone innocence.

The joy of running carefree
without the societal guilt of
bull-shit.

"adorned only by natures beauty
wild flowers my covering
kissing my milky flesh
with their tender petals"

If I may momentarily feign, "psychoanalyst"
and interpret your beautiful prose...

We/you are natures beauty clothed
with the earth

Governments, religions put shame upon
us but by your poems I ascertain that
about you.


This is a wonderful poem of discovery
from you.


   Much enjoyed... Pan

Pan I love your interpretation of my poem yes I dream of the days when we were able to be free and nude clothed only by nature.. at one with the Earth thank you :) with love and respect Brenda

This is sensual i love the imagery here i can actually see this

Walking upon the beach
A continual fresh of footprints indented in the sand as the surf washes your feet
Each step is a new path that leads to you
Wind in your hair cleansing your clay frame becoming lost in the breeze
Shells strewn across the wet grains
Soul becomes one with the elements
Nature of things that mother provides
Spirit immersed, Perpetual baptism
Each step a rebirth
Surf taking away the old you into the sea

DA what you wrote is so lovely it blessed my soul this morning thank you :) with love and respect Crim

Beautiful write. Hope the weather is better than here. Sounds like great fun. :)

thank you lovely Flower yes were enjoying fair weather but this more along the lines of summer dreaming :) with love and respect Crim

Simply beautiful.

wonderful writing.

I am starved for this kind of verse, thank you for providing it.

xx

thank you Poet for putting a smile on my face this morning :) with love and respect Brenda

This is so beautiful, and the images are sexy and sensual. An essence born of pure natural captivation.:)it's a 10*

thank you beautiful Angel for your gracious and lovely comments :) with love and respect Crim

Ahhhh Truly Beautiful Dear Crim!!!
Wonderful Write!!!

thank you kind Soul I always enjoy your visits :) with love and respect Crim

Gentle and beautiful!! Love it!!

thank you lovely lady for feeling this poem :) with love and respect Crim

Tranquil and beautiful imagery n wording
my friend :) excellent ink! :)

thank you Poe it made me dreamy writing it :) with love and respect Crim

beautifullywritten.com
In love with this ink, Crim...Xo

thank you lovely Rain for making me smile wide today :) with love and respect Crim

Perfection
. *period*

thank you kindly VP :) with love and respect Crim

I want to come with you :)

Hash when I get to go again you're invited :) I live there in my soul :) with love and respect Crim

To be one with earth, such a magnificent notion.  I am spell bound by the landscape in which you bask in, such tranquility. Makes one wish to step within the foot prints you left behind.

Some day we will walk these beaches hand in hand kind Soul thank you for being here :) with love and respect Crim

A dreamy tranquil piece Crim.  A beautiful place to be. :)

thank you kindly Magdalena :) with love and respect Crim

this is the most melodic peice I have ever read from you....



I am in love with this write!


XOXO
Fire

thank you beautiful Fire for making my day :) with love Brenda

Brenda, you totally shine with this poem and it shows your diversity.  I'm not sure if you live in N. Cali but i know the area and i felt i was there all over again by reading this.  It's exceptionally beautiful and sensual and i'm taking it home with me.

thank you Vee you made my night beautiful lady :) yes I live in N. Cali but not in Big Sur I've only visited there.. though I live there in my soul.. with love and respect Brenda :)

awww, I just enjoyed a week in Palm Springs and wished I had more time to venture up to Yosemite or Sequoia Parks.

Wonderful snapshot of nature from the Pacific to the woods deep!

sounds like a great time Ken :) I live where the forest and ocean meet in my soul :) with love and respect Crim

I adore poetry that incorporates nature. This is yet another amazing poem! :]

thank you lovely lady :) with love Crim

A truly captivating write...makes me want to linger and enjoy the scenery!

I've always wanted to visit Big Sur when I was living in the Bay Area, but never had a chance...wish I could someday.

Your poem captures the beauty of it all!

/EngrVV

thank you EngrW you should definitely visit sometime as I have in times past still living there in my soul :) with respect Crim