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Clark Kent
i know you think of me
as Superman
but i'm not
you think the bullets
bounce off my chest
think i feel no pain
but you're wrong
they hurt
maybe it doesn't show
on the outside
but deep down inside
pain flows
and the blood runs
weighing me down
hurting all around
you might not see it
but i feel it
"I am no Superman"
as Superman
but i'm not
you think the bullets
bounce off my chest
think i feel no pain
but you're wrong
they hurt
maybe it doesn't show
on the outside
but deep down inside
pain flows
and the blood runs
weighing me down
hurting all around
you might not see it
but i feel it
"I am no Superman"
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Re: Clark Kent
14th Mar 2014 00:57am
A tough exterior at times hide more pain than others. Indeed this is true. Good write, Hashman.
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14th Mar 2014 7:37pm
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14th Mar 2014 00:59am
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14th Mar 2014 7:39pm
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14th Mar 2014 1:14am
Re: Clark Kent
14th Mar 2014 2:47am
Hash a very open expression of emotion.. so brave poetic soul :) with love and respect Crim
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re: Re: Clark Kent
14th Mar 2014 7:41pm
Re: Clark Kent
14th Mar 2014 3:38am
Well I think those words are your kryptonite but you're STILL
pretty SUPER to me bro! :)
pretty SUPER to me bro! :)
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14th Mar 2014 7:43pm
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That just became my favorite poem of the year to me that was amazing!!! NICE truly amazing
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14th Mar 2014 7:46pm
Re: Clark Kent
14th Mar 2014 4:53pm
It's so good that in these days and age men do not need to be superheroes. Just let your feelings show ... Hash, that's a heartrending write.
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14th Mar 2014 7:49pm
Re: Clark Kent
Such an honest, heart-wrenching expression of emotions, my friend!
While "it may sound absurd, but don't be so naive,even heroes have the right to bleed"...soo "much more than a man, in a funny red cape...."**
Your piece perfectly depicts the sad irony of those who are perceived to be larger than life...the difficulty of their existence.
(You will always be special...just the way you are! I mean, after all.......it's a well-known fact that :
Lois Lane fell in love with Clark Kent...F I R S T .) :) Oxx
** "superman (It's Not Easy)"~~Five For Fighting
While "it may sound absurd, but don't be so naive,even heroes have the right to bleed"...soo "much more than a man, in a funny red cape...."**
Your piece perfectly depicts the sad irony of those who are perceived to be larger than life...the difficulty of their existence.
(You will always be special...just the way you are! I mean, after all.......it's a well-known fact that :
Lois Lane fell in love with Clark Kent...F I R S T .) :) Oxx
** "superman (It's Not Easy)"~~Five For Fighting
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re: Re: Clark Kent
14th Mar 2014 7:58pm
Thank you DarkEnchantress,your words always bring me joy...and that well known fact that: Lois Lane fell in love with Clark Kent first...made my heart swell :)
Re: Clark Kent
Anonymous
15th Mar 2014 1:13am
Awe! I know this feeling. Because you smile.....people think you feel no pain. This is pure honesty and emotion. So relate. Enjoyed this soul written piece. :)
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re: Re: Clark Kent
16th Mar 2014 10:59am
Thank you flower...(spring is coming...waiting for the daffodils to start popping) :)
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17th Mar 2014 5:58pm
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18th Mar 2014 6:48pm
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18th Mar 2014 2:17pm
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18th Mar 2014 6:49pm
Re: Clark Kent
7th Apr 2014 11:54am
......
I'm no Superman
just another human
with a rather thick skin
that hides the ache of pinch
and a much bigger heart
that absorbs the hurt....
.... ..... ....
good write Hashman!!!
I'm no Superman
just another human
with a rather thick skin
that hides the ache of pinch
and a much bigger heart
that absorbs the hurt....
.... ..... ....
good write Hashman!!!
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7th Apr 2014 1:01pm
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2014 10:15pm
You're definitely a talented poet, that's for sure. Great work.
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15th Jun 2014 00:08am
Re: Clark Kent
20th Jun 2014 3:48pm
Great write. :)
This is very true on top of that.
Also, I can feel the emotion in this because I can relate very much to this.
Keep up the great work!
Have a good day.
This is very true on top of that.
Also, I can feel the emotion in this because I can relate very much to this.
Keep up the great work!
Have a good day.
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Re: Clark Kent
21st Jun 2014 1:14am
thanks for reading and feeling my words lovely lady...you also have a good day :)