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Circling
I can feel the pain drawing the pulse out.
That serves me, once again.
skin tacky, gouged blade snarl
Right here, now, who inherits this spot?
What your hands hold won't help.
slithered leather, welts hiss
This is where mercy died. The fire failed,
but I will not.
fresh red runs over dried black...
Published 13th Mar 2014
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13th Mar 2014 1:32pm
14th Mar 2014 7:04am
13th Mar 2014 3:01pm
Atakti so vivid in imagery and fortitude no matter what your will won't be broke.. great ink :) with love and respect Crim
14th Mar 2014 7:05am
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14th Mar 2014 4:07pm
Cringing with your imagery, i can see the 'vultures'....Yet their gathering be wasted! (lol) :)
My friend, this piece is truly a tribute to the strength of the human spirit...that incredible will to survive!
Inspiring ink, my friend!
My friend, this piece is truly a tribute to the strength of the human spirit...that incredible will to survive!
Inspiring ink, my friend!
14th Mar 2014 8:37pm
Dark Enchantress, your comments honor me with your insights. I'm glad to think my words might inspire, thank you!
16th Mar 2014 00:01am
Whoa. Intense write atk. Moves a part of me towards that 'dark ambient' stuff. Could make some really good audio torture with these vibes
16th Mar 2014 4:39pm
Hey, Nomah, if you're moved to music, make sure you come back and link me up! Would be great to hear what you come up with...
Thanks, man.
Thanks, man.
Anonymous
16th Mar 2014 9:30pm
Everything becomes part of the cycle of life, death, dark and light...
Deep thoughts there
Deep thoughts there
17th Mar 2014 8:13am
Love how your mind ticks, Mourganna... Here I thought it was just a load of snarls and fights.
Thank you!
Thank you!
17th Mar 2014 9:24am
Makes me think of releasing bad blood so fresh clean blood can replace it... or something like that.
Powerful piece Atakti. Strong emotion. Great stuff. :)
Powerful piece Atakti. Strong emotion. Great stuff. :)
17th Mar 2014 4:25pm
