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A Hollywood Film...
Lights, Camera, action…
This hyper-active set promises,
One most unleashing experience,
That cinema ever has seen.
Man, machine, woman & attraction.
One robot falls in love…
With this beautiful damsel,
In one dark set, she bares it all,
And the strange stuff is that-
She loses her virginity and you began to cough.
What next! The real life action…
The rolling light falls down,
In yet another set accident,
The whole set blazes into fire,
The heroine dies for a pre-planned insurance sanction.
The producer wins the claim…
The metal dealer buys the robot scraps,
Effortlessly dismantling the intelligence,
And the post mortem report says that-
“She conceived in her womb, a strange thing to blame.”
This hyper-active set promises,
One most unleashing experience,
That cinema ever has seen.
Man, machine, woman & attraction.
One robot falls in love…
With this beautiful damsel,
In one dark set, she bares it all,
And the strange stuff is that-
She loses her virginity and you began to cough.
What next! The real life action…
The rolling light falls down,
In yet another set accident,
The whole set blazes into fire,
The heroine dies for a pre-planned insurance sanction.
The producer wins the claim…
The metal dealer buys the robot scraps,
Effortlessly dismantling the intelligence,
And the post mortem report says that-
“She conceived in her womb, a strange thing to blame.”
Published 5th Mar 2011
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5th Mar 2011 10:25am
'The real life action…
The rolling light falls down,
In yet another set accident,
The whole set blazes into fire,
The heroine dies for a pre-planned insurance sanction.' I loved the use of the word 'the' in this, you executed a common word in a completely new way, like you were so excited about the tale and there was simply too much going on. I really enjoyed this, nice work, Anandosen
The rolling light falls down,
In yet another set accident,
The whole set blazes into fire,
The heroine dies for a pre-planned insurance sanction.' I loved the use of the word 'the' in this, you executed a common word in a completely new way, like you were so excited about the tale and there was simply too much going on. I really enjoyed this, nice work, Anandosen
5th Mar 2011 10:29am
Indeed I appreciate your observation so much LA. I wanted to see its effect in my readers and you caught it first hand. I am delighted.
5th Mar 2011 1:53pm
7th Mar 2011 9:12am
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5th Mar 2011 4:28pm
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7th Mar 2011 9:20am
I appreciate your sexual interpretation as always my friend...Maybe you should read some of my non-masala works that don't argues these things at all...but then otherwise I am glad and more than excited that you liked this one.
Anonymous
11th Mar 2011 2:04am
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5th Mar 2011 9:28pm
7th Mar 2011 9:24am
I am honored lady and it will be ma pleasure in offering you more of such works in future. You can read my past works too...
Anonymous
7th Mar 2011 11:54am
This is your finest poem yet. Simply a masterpiece Anando. Witty and dark and filled with passion, a blackly comic tour-de-force that I'll never regret having read. The final diction is the icing on the cake, so bitter and remorseless it is. A beautiful satire, my friend.
7th Mar 2011 12:04pm
I don't believe too much in statistics Jack esp when it comes to your comments. There is no doubt or second choice for me that you are my fav writer in DUP and after recieving this compliment from you, I don't have a second choice to think that this one is ma best so far...I will put this as my benchmark and try to compose my other works ahead of this. I am deligted today my friend and you are the reson behind.
14th Mar 2011 2:50pm
18th Mar 2011 10:04am
I thank all of you from the core of my heart to make this poem of mine convert into your feelings and showing your honest and most sincere comments. Thank you the blueproof...
