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In Innocence I Blush
Tempest awakens
stirring lust
tumultuous storm
riding the seas
of desire incarnate
wind swept hair
long wild mane
covering my nakedness
in innocence I blush
for my wanton display
of affection played out
for all to see
sobered by morn
I cover my shame
with a breezy dress
casually stroll
the beach causing
heads to turn
with a gleam in my eye
pouty lips to be kissed
the salt spray my perfume
I know I will fall again
but today I'm on top
a seductress not easily swayed
(inspiration from Awakenedsoul's poem comment on my write My Cheating heart with love Crim :)
stirring lust
tumultuous storm
riding the seas
of desire incarnate
wind swept hair
long wild mane
covering my nakedness
in innocence I blush
for my wanton display
of affection played out
for all to see
sobered by morn
I cover my shame
with a breezy dress
casually stroll
the beach causing
heads to turn
with a gleam in my eye
pouty lips to be kissed
the salt spray my perfume
I know I will fall again
but today I'm on top
a seductress not easily swayed
(inspiration from Awakenedsoul's poem comment on my write My Cheating heart with love Crim :)
Published 12th Mar 2014
| Edited 13th Mar 2014
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12th Mar 2014 9:25pm
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12th Mar 2014 8:40pm
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12th Mar 2014 9:26pm
thank you kindly Gabriel for your gracious comment :) with love and respect Crim
12th Mar 2014 9:09pm
I particularly liked the first 4 stanzas…visually sexy. Excellent write!
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12th Mar 2014 9:27pm
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Mar 2014 9:48pm
12th Mar 2014 9:47pm
I'm intrigued with this. Inspiration shines thru your soul. Sure "Soul" will be proud to have inspired such talent. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed! :)
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13th Mar 2014 5:52am
having a winning hand and holding it close to your chest for a while...
loved this Brenda.
loved this Brenda.
13th Mar 2014 6:46am
thank you beautiful Mia though truth be told I'm bluffing :) with love and respect Brenda
13th Mar 2014 10:12am
Like a good movie...you have to see it twice to enjoy it more!
Beautiful brenda !
Beautiful brenda !
13th Mar 2014 3:09pm
13th Mar 2014 2:55pm
Awesome visuals. Love the salty spray.. Nicely written 'inspired by', Crim :)
13th Mar 2014 3:11pm
thank you beautiful Angel i'll leave the rest to your imagination :) with love and respect Crim
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13th Mar 2014 4:43pm
The sweet salty mist falls onto me
A hypnotic scent of erotic ecstasy
a piteous beauty stole my very eyes
frozen, I witness a wild horse at play
A spirit free carried by the wind, a vision that I will cherish. Honored to have invoked.
beyond respect, Awakened Soul
A hypnotic scent of erotic ecstasy
a piteous beauty stole my very eyes
frozen, I witness a wild horse at play
A spirit free carried by the wind, a vision that I will cherish. Honored to have invoked.
beyond respect, Awakened Soul
13th Mar 2014 5:30pm
13th Mar 2014 11:02pm
I can see you swaying in your breezy dress...wonderful write,lovely image my lady :)
13th Mar 2014 11:13pm
14th Mar 2014 2:53am
....some of the commentary on our ink truly motivates our pen to spill beautifully.
I so love this write, Crim! Xo
Pen Love~
I so love this write, Crim! Xo
Pen Love~
14th Mar 2014 3:05am
thank you beautiful Rain yes inspiration is all around us :) with love and respect Crim
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29th Nov 2016 11:42pm
Impressive writing. I like your choice of words as well as tone and attitude in this.
30th Nov 2016 11:18am
