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Hemi - Full Throttle
He posts every poem under "love"
— by the gods of dirt, he means it.
He wears his nakedness like a philosophy;
I don't mean bare skin, although he's done that too...
(ladies, breathe)
He sails away on brine and avoidance,
yet anchors himself with his truths.
I dig his filthy driving, more than the hot prose.
I'd swear his stare reeks of diesel and sweat.
(oxygen, so important)
Oh, he's (not) death proof, though he burns through himself
like he is. He has Grim in his line of sight, taking people,
giving him tenacity. His laugh has this hard edge...
He carved the flesh from faults, damage, wear and tear,
and we're hooked because he bleeds our own silent confessions.
He has, in turn, discarded skins and lies,
the booze, the anger, and empty sex.
(helplines now open, ladies)
Hemi deconstructs. What remains, is Hemi.
Tribute to hemihead, http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/hemihead/
under "love" where the dirt gods can find it.
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12th Mar 2014 8:01am
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11th Mar 2014 11:35pm
Excellence to excellence-You captured his vibe perfectly!!!
Good luck in the comp. Atakti!!!
Good luck in the comp. Atakti!!!
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12th Mar 2014 8:03am
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11th Mar 2014 11:40pm
Atakti a more fitting tribute I could never have envisioned.. this is perfect!!! with love and respect Crim
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12th Mar 2014 8:04am
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Well now..this is definitely a bit of alright,my Friend!
In all honesty, i am not that well-acquainted with Hemi, but this piece leaves very little 'un-exposed'(or few doubts remaining...questions unanswered...etc.,etc.) (GOL !) :P
' ' ' 'Runnin wide-open, and 'full throttle'--to be certain!
(My very best of luck to you in the comp!!!)
In all honesty, i am not that well-acquainted with Hemi, but this piece leaves very little 'un-exposed'(or few doubts remaining...questions unanswered...etc.,etc.) (GOL !) :P
' ' ' 'Runnin wide-open, and 'full throttle'--to be certain!
(My very best of luck to you in the comp!!!)
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12th Mar 2014 8:06am
Bit of alright suits me! Hemi has a strong presence - check his work out sometime.
Thank you, Dark Enchantress.
Thank you, Dark Enchantress.
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12th Mar 2014 2:38am
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12th Mar 2014 8:06am
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12th Mar 2014 3:19am
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12th Mar 2014 8:07am
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12th Mar 2014 5:52pm
What an awesome dedication, I never heard of him
but if he's moved you to scribe in his honor
I'm guessing he must be pretty good :)
but if he's moved you to scribe in his honor
I'm guessing he must be pretty good :)
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12th Mar 2014 6:05pm
Hemi writes confessional pieces, a far cry from my abstract burblings. This style attracts me for the balance I think my writing needs. He really is a very good writer, read him if you get a chance.
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17th Mar 2014 8:29am
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17th Mar 2014 8:33am
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17th Mar 2014 8:46am
I was just about to go out, so quickly commented here because I forgot to get back to it. But now I have a week off work so I can play catch up. :)
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