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Sick & Tired
Lurching up
Plunging down
Loop to loop
Spinning round and round
Hyperventilating crying
Begging to stop
Then that rush of adrenaline
When you're at the top
Thrilling excitement
Hearts throbbing erratically
Close your eyes and bear it
Screaming and yelling spasmodically
Perpetual rounds
This amusement park from hell
Slowly draining my mind
Yet keeping me sane...
Drunkenly getting on again
Spouting "We might as well!"
Dizzy, faint of heart
Vivacious drive faded
Unlike the ride's start
Lurching up
Plunging down
Loop to loop
Spinning round and round
Oh, well... Might as well go again
Plunging down
Loop to loop
Spinning round and round
Hyperventilating crying
Begging to stop
Then that rush of adrenaline
When you're at the top
Thrilling excitement
Hearts throbbing erratically
Close your eyes and bear it
Screaming and yelling spasmodically
Perpetual rounds
This amusement park from hell
Slowly draining my mind
Yet keeping me sane...
Drunkenly getting on again
Spouting "We might as well!"
Dizzy, faint of heart
Vivacious drive faded
Unlike the ride's start
Lurching up
Plunging down
Loop to loop
Spinning round and round
Oh, well... Might as well go again
Published 10th Mar 2014
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- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am
11th Mar 2014 10:04am
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13th Mar 2014 4:06am
Anonymous
13th Mar 2014 2:47am
Kitty its a cycle you just have to endure and know it'll be ok.
As far as the structure, its really tight and very good, it flows effortlessly. Very well conveyed and written.
As far as the structure, its really tight and very good, it flows effortlessly. Very well conveyed and written.
13th Mar 2014 4:06am
