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The Devil's Cum
Darkened skies
paint my horizons onyx
thoughts of you
binding my nights
with chains of iron
coiled tightly around
my naked form
creamy pussy open and exposed
lust burns bright
as I struggle
against my restraints
defiantly I react
rebellious in nature
with a firm hand
you chastise me
taming my demons
with collar and leash
on my knees before you
I kneel as if at an altar
saying my prayers
to the powers that be
creaming out Hail Mary's
while petting my pussy
at the devil's throne
I cum at your command
while you spill
your seed
in my wanton mouth
tasting you on my tongue
savoring my communion
drinking your offering
luscious lips
bitten and bruised
now in submission
paint my horizons onyx
thoughts of you
binding my nights
with chains of iron
coiled tightly around
my naked form
creamy pussy open and exposed
lust burns bright
as I struggle
against my restraints
defiantly I react
rebellious in nature
with a firm hand
you chastise me
taming my demons
with collar and leash
on my knees before you
I kneel as if at an altar
saying my prayers
to the powers that be
creaming out Hail Mary's
while petting my pussy
at the devil's throne
I cum at your command
while you spill
your seed
in my wanton mouth
tasting you on my tongue
savoring my communion
drinking your offering
luscious lips
bitten and bruised
now in submission
Published 8th Mar 2014
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8th Mar 2014 5:21pm
That was very arousing. You write with an erotic force that breathes sordid, steamy life into the words.
I liked it a lot.
I liked it a lot.
8th Mar 2014 5:40pm
8th Mar 2014 5:22pm
Submissive steamy fucking hot! Damn! You rock!
'creaming out Hail Mary's'
Quite possibly my favorite line of all time. Phenomenal!
'creaming out Hail Mary's'
Quite possibly my favorite line of all time. Phenomenal!
8th Mar 2014 5:41pm
thank you VP for putting a big smile on my face this morning :) with love and respect Crim
Anonymous
8th Mar 2014 5:57pm
Holy.... sacrament Brenda, you have woven the holy and unholy pretty well with this wicked piece.
There's always that struggle in the mind what the body craves and that little voice demands, very well captured here.
There's always that struggle in the mind what the body craves and that little voice demands, very well captured here.
8th Mar 2014 6:05pm
thank you Vee for such a great comment causing a wicked smile on my face :) with love and respect Brenda
8th Mar 2014 6:24pm
8th Mar 2014 6:34pm
8th Mar 2014 7:22pm
i'm not sure why... but all of a sudden i'm quite parched...
Brenda you are deviance personified. brava bella poeta.
Brenda you are deviance personified. brava bella poeta.
Mia I love you witty sexy style :) thank you for such a gracious comment and for giving me such a wicked smile today.. with love and respect beautiful lady.. Brenda
8th Mar 2014 7:58pm
Oh baby, you've flipped the switch, so excited with this one Crim, LOVE IT! :)
8th Mar 2014 8:12pm
8th Mar 2014 7:58pm
Good Lordy! Whhhaaa!!?? "Creamy pussy
open and exposed" WOW that line pretty much
Mindfucked me by itself! lol
open and exposed" WOW that line pretty much
Mindfucked me by itself! lol
8th Mar 2014 8:13pm
Poe always great to have a good mind fuck to start the day with thank you :) with love and respect Crim
8th Mar 2014 8:24pm
Oh Shit!! Saw the title in my notification and I sped over here and found a sinfully delicious piece. Crim, you're Awesome....Xo
8th Mar 2014 9:00pm
thank you beautiful Rain for such a lovely comment.. I think your awesome as well beautiful lady :) with love and respect Crim
8th Mar 2014 9:07pm
This is beautiful. The dedication, love and fearless lioness expressed is most appealing. The raw passion and the godlious undertones makes it very gripping. It empowers the almighty being in us, savagely embracing deep desires. Just damb good, smoking hot.
8th Mar 2014 9:19pm
thank you Soul for your most moving critique causing me to smile wide :) with love and respect Crim
8th Mar 2014 10:26pm
Pack your bags. I'm sending you to the home for wayward girls. SINNERS REPENT
The devil is in the details ....
xx
The devil is in the details ....
xx
9th Mar 2014 3:26pm
yes you're right the devil's in the details.. I loved you funny reply by the way made me smile :) with love and respect Brenda
8th Mar 2014 10:26pm
she has found her place of ecstasy.. beautifully so... The imagery is seductive.. :)
9th Mar 2014 3:27pm
9th Mar 2014 6:21am
chastising is the punishment for one who resists the chains of demonic seduction, till she submits to ecstasy. stormy, Crim...
9th Mar 2014 3:28pm
thank you John I always enjoy your visits and insight on my writes :) with love and respect Crim
9th Mar 2014 2:58pm
It's not usually my thing ,erotic poetry I mean, but sleeping with the devil is an interesting thought.. good poem.
9th Mar 2014 3:30pm
I hear you Kourtniss I think I may stay away from the erotic for awhile.. thank you for visiting me and leaving your thoughts :) with love and respect Brenda
9th Mar 2014 10:07pm
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10th Mar 2014 4:15am
dantes inferno turn to erotica... JK
how you manage to keep both sides interesting my dear bren....i mean crim!
how you manage to keep both sides interesting my dear bren....i mean crim!
10th Mar 2014 6:08am
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11th Mar 2014 7:18am
you gave me a wicked smile with your comment thank you :) with love and respect Crim
11th Mar 2014 8:49pm
Sub-Wicked Sexy Lady Crimson!!!!
Love the read and write sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
Love the read and write sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
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20th Mar 2014 6:32am
I don't even know how to respond to this gem...probably one of the best erotic dark pieces I've ever read...very well done..and loving the word choice.....Michael
20th Mar 2014 6:40am
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29th Oct 2015 1:52pm
thank you beautiful one for showing me love on the oldie :)
I love you lovely one..
xoxoxo Brenda
I love you lovely one..
xoxoxo Brenda
