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Wildfire
The blade of my knife
cutting out poetic thought
from pain and pleasure
wicked corridors
of a twisted mind
once a deadly carver
of blood and bone
bondage of sensual
incarnate desire
inking out lust and passion
now a flickering reflection
mirrored in my writing
my deprived, depraved state
hungrily on the prowl
for a man to sate and take command
grab my wild mane
bring me into a state of submission
in this state of rebellion
I run afoul
needing a firm hand
to bind and keep me
cause my lust to burn bright
a fire that illuminates my beauty
cutting out poetic thought
from pain and pleasure
wicked corridors
of a twisted mind
once a deadly carver
of blood and bone
bondage of sensual
incarnate desire
inking out lust and passion
now a flickering reflection
mirrored in my writing
my deprived, depraved state
hungrily on the prowl
for a man to sate and take command
grab my wild mane
bring me into a state of submission
in this state of rebellion
I run afoul
needing a firm hand
to bind and keep me
cause my lust to burn bright
a fire that illuminates my beauty
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Re: Wild Fire
6th Mar 2014 5:46pm
Rough hardened hands
to sooth the soul
submission is beautiful
through the hands of control
I love every thing about this, the emotional experience to just read is profound. Left with so many thoughts.
to sooth the soul
submission is beautiful
through the hands of control
I love every thing about this, the emotional experience to just read is profound. Left with so many thoughts.
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re: Re: Wild Fire
6th Mar 2014 6:06pm
thank you Soul your poem comments always touch my heart so beautiful they are :) with love and respect Crim
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6th Mar 2014 5:54pm
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6th Mar 2014 6:07pm
Thank you Poet for understanding me and for just being here :) with love and respect Brenda
Re: Wild Fire
6th Mar 2014 8:46pm
Wildfire...uncontainable passion is more apt! lol
Raw, hot, intense ink...
Raw, hot, intense ink...
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re: Re: Wild Fire
6th Mar 2014 8:54pm
oops I spelled wildfire wrong thank you Poe for putting a wicked smile on my face with your comment :) with love and respect Crim
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6th Mar 2014 9:46pm
Re: Wildfire
6th Mar 2014 10:06pm
Lucky you. I have 'a firm hand.' LOL! :D
Outstanding ink, as always!
Bravo! BRAVO!
Outstanding ink, as always!
Bravo! BRAVO!
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6th Mar 2014 10:34pm
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7th Mar 2014 00:52am
Re: Wildfire
Anonymous
7th Mar 2014 2:19am
Um......all he needs to do is read this poem once and he will come running to light that flame that already lights the fiery beauty deep inside your soul. Flame on sexy Lady! :)
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re: Re: Wildfire
7th Mar 2014 7:12am
thank you lovely Flower for the kind encouragement :) making me smile.. with love and respect Crim
Re: Wildfire
7th Mar 2014 8:38am
Crim, you are such a temptress! the desire you have is written in fire...
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re: Re: Wildfire
7th Mar 2014 3:30pm
thank you John for such a great comment warming me :) with love and respect Crim
Re: Wildfire
7th Mar 2014 10:48am
caged and collared birds sing more beautifully... or so my sadist says...
love this passionate expression of desire, Brenda.
love this passionate expression of desire, Brenda.
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re: Re: Wildfire
7th Mar 2014 3:32pm
thank you beautiful Mia poetically and in life you rock in my eyes!!! with love and respect Brenda :)
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7th Mar 2014 9:55pm
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8th Mar 2014 7:21am
thank you beautiful Angel.. putting a big smile on my face tonight :) with love and respect Crim
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10th Mar 2014 11:55pm
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