Pyro Eyes

This is an important write.
I know the difference between darkness and light.
Keep fighting Brenda
Your path will be illuminated.
xx
Poet

thank you Poet just feeling a bit dark lately it will pass :) with love and respect Brenda

Sometimes, down in the dumps is a place to listen for your Heart to tell You how to find that place of Tranquility You once new.

thank you kindly for your visit and insight :) much love Crim

I LOVE the darkness in you, it's AHmazing poetry Crim, I feel this, and the battle cry...yes, I've done it a million times! A fantastic poem! :)

thank you Tommie for making me smile with your heartfelt comment and add to you RL :) with love and respect Crim

Wonderful scream Dear Crim!!!
Paint it black!!!

thank you kind Soul :) much love Crim

First off, shame you deleted the last one it was a great poem.

I see, you're starting to experiment with some nice subtle rhyme, it works well for you, fair play.

this is, as per, raw life put into easy readable stanzas.  I have no suggestions for you here, I think you've done a bang up job

shone on Miss

Craic I know sigh I'm the mad with the delete button when feeling too vulnerable.. thank you for your heartfelt comment :) with love and respect Crim

shadow voices replay my pain
keeping wounds bleeding and fresh
knifing me with its sharp memories
must fight to survive, no time for crying
must behead the serpent that strangles me
but I like my own head on my shoulders
So what do I do with the mind that is fucking with me.

Rage is honest, TRUTH in bold letters.  Pain never lies.  I am always amazed by the comfort of those things.

thank you Soul for your poetic truth
you always see into me.. with love and respect Crim :)

When you write dark.....I swear the devils sigh rocks hell. You are powerful!!!!! You write from a side that you feel is weak, but you are not! Writing with such power shows you have risen much further beyond the pain than you realize. Keep inking strong. Xo :)

thank you beautiful Flower yes I feel vulnerable at times and it brings out the dark side of me.. thank you lovely lady for such a wickedly kind comment.. with love and respect Crim :)

Painting the walls grey with your lovely shadow, and the do cower... This is stunning, Crim* :)

thank you lovely Angel for your poetic comment :) with love and respect Crim

thank you Bolt for getting this write and saying you hear a song in it :) with love and respect Crim

That terrible mood of depression of whether it's any good or not is what is known as The Artist's Reward.
                               Ernest Hemingway

good ink crim ....awesome remedy for the mutual feeling.

thank you Cesar for the profound Hemingway quote and for the great comment :) with love and respect Crim

I am putting this one on my reading list!!!!Great ink Crim!!!

thank you for making me smile wide this morning lovely lady :) I'm honored and touched by your add as well.. with love and respect Crim

Deep. Sad. There's a finality to it, like, making up your mind to do something difficult and being done with it.

thank you Malki I for getting this poem :) with love and respect Crim

I can see the fire in your eyes, Crim, defying the darkness. make em burn!...

John I love your comments yes I will make them burn!!! with love and respect Crim

Brenda, this dark beauty is who you are and why i fell in love with your poetry.
this piece is poignant and relatable on so many levels.

thank you beautiful Mia I know in my heart you see clearly into my soul.. with love and so much respect Brenda :)

"a cigarette butt graveyard"
"to murder this depression"

Love those two lines Crim.  Great write with much strength. :)

thank you lovely Magdalena for such a great comment :) with love and respect Crim