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This is a bit of me
I only wear high heels in public,
to bed with strange men and while
pumping gas,none of that is true,
I listen to rock and roll
barefoot and sway to jazz
with the windows open, I'm a true
blonde slowly turning into a ginger
as I age, I'm ok with that,
I say fuck, I like to fuck and I
won't do what anyone tells me, I
do what I want,I kiss my kids
goodnight, sometimes I'm scared for
them but never show it, when I laugh
I'm loud it's infectious, people like
it, if they don't they don't say so,
I can sing, love to sing, I'm more
afraid of love then dying, all
of that is true.
to bed with strange men and while
pumping gas,none of that is true,
I listen to rock and roll
barefoot and sway to jazz
with the windows open, I'm a true
blonde slowly turning into a ginger
as I age, I'm ok with that,
I say fuck, I like to fuck and I
won't do what anyone tells me, I
do what I want,I kiss my kids
goodnight, sometimes I'm scared for
them but never show it, when I laugh
I'm loud it's infectious, people like
it, if they don't they don't say so,
I can sing, love to sing, I'm more
afraid of love then dying, all
of that is true.
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Re: This is a bit of me
3rd Mar 2014 5:54pm
I like the way you've structured this, it gives it a pleasantly staccato flow.. It was really fun to read.
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re: Re: This is a bit of me
3rd Mar 2014 6:40pm
Re: This is a bit of me
3rd Mar 2014 5:56pm
Tommie you light up the stage with your beauty.. great ink and peak into who you are :) with love and respect Crim
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re: Re: This is a bit of me
3rd Mar 2014 6:42pm
Always a pleasure to have your feedback Crim, deeply appreciate every word. :)
Re: This is a bit of me
3rd Mar 2014 6:27pm
You pretty much sound like a hot blonde, angel, loving mommy with more than one talent that ANY guy would want...at least that's what I think :)
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re: Re: This is a bit of me
3rd Mar 2014 6:43pm
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3rd Mar 2014 8:53pm
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re: Re: This is a bit of me
3rd Mar 2014 9:48pm
What a great idea Gabriel, I have no idea how to do that...but I could ask around. Thank you for your kind words. ;)
Re: This is a bit of me
3rd Mar 2014 11:01pm
Do love this piece, especially how you reveal parts of yourself in your falling lines. Great ink x
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3rd Mar 2014 11:14pm
Re: This is a bit of me
3rd Mar 2014 11:33pm
Wow! I love the range of this Tommie. So much conveyed in so small a space ... powerful!
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4th Mar 2014 00:00am
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4th Mar 2014 1:09am
Re: This is a bit of me
4th Mar 2014 4:16am
A matter-of-fact portrait of a modern goddess :) I identify heart and soul with "I kiss my kids
goodnight, sometimes I'm scared for
them but never show it" and although I am very much afraid of dying true love does scare me as well...it is a fear I am willing and seeking to face.
Thank you for sharing a slice of your life :)
Oh and I live to sing!
goodnight, sometimes I'm scared for
them but never show it" and although I am very much afraid of dying true love does scare me as well...it is a fear I am willing and seeking to face.
Thank you for sharing a slice of your life :)
Oh and I live to sing!
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re: Re: This is a bit of me
4th Mar 2014 5:10am
Some days music is the only thing that gets me by.
Your words are always a pleasure GW, truly! Thank you dear friend ;)
Your words are always a pleasure GW, truly! Thank you dear friend ;)
Re: This is a bit of me
8th Apr 2014 11:33pm