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Dreaming
To the stars I fly
Through empty space
Open arms I glide
On an endless chase
Don't know where I go
Or where I have been
How I love this flow
I'll ride it to the end
Nothings what it seams
Stars are shining bright
This was just a dream
I had late last night
Through empty space
Open arms I glide
On an endless chase
Don't know where I go
Or where I have been
How I love this flow
I'll ride it to the end
Nothings what it seams
Stars are shining bright
This was just a dream
I had late last night
Published 2nd Mar 2014
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2nd Mar 2014 2:29pm
Think there is a typo here - should not first line read:
To the STARS I fly
'Stats' in English vernacular is usually an abbreviation of the word 'statistics'.
Otherwise like simple style of verse.
To the STARS I fly
'Stats' in English vernacular is usually an abbreviation of the word 'statistics'.
Otherwise like simple style of verse.
4th Mar 2014 5:44am
29th Apr 2014 2:18pm
Great write, full of description and expression. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
--Lissie
--Lissie
