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the atheist hedges his bets and beds betty crocker
at the jumping off point of faith in meaning
life is a prick point of mystery
in the energy field of the universe
a puncture hole of being
a sticking point of mind that questions
our science of disbelief in everything
with a million case and points of maybe
cause at the breaking point of gone
you might need all the brownie points you can get
when the point of no return ticket
prints at the pearly gate kiosk
or you take another roll on the counter
point karmic wheel of redemption
Written by
0913338
(Semaj)
Published 21st Feb 2014
| Edited 24th Feb 2014
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Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
21st Feb 2014 6:14am
re: Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
21st Feb 2014 6:07pm
happy you pointed your mind in me ( i've been enjoying my strolls in your tawdry and other sundry tales as well) though the across the pond use of the word knickers gives me snickers
Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
21st Feb 2014 8:30am
Yep - up against a wall, crouched in a corner - on questions of survival, instinct trumps logic everytime
Cool lines, great title
Cool lines, great title
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re: Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
21st Feb 2014 6:11pm
and instinct can be a devastating blade when honed on the whet stone of logic ( that seems to be part of our diabolical legacy any way)
Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
Anonymous
21st Feb 2014 11:08am
goddang..."brownies"..."dessert"...I haven't finished savoring the "morning yolks of sunrise" yet... ;)

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re: Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
21st Feb 2014 6:14pm
something about the voice of you comes crashing through everything you write and makes me smile when it does
re: re: Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
Anonymous
21st Feb 2014 10:52pm
You changed the title now! WHY does Betty Crocker get all the love? The Sunmaid Raisin Maiden is so much prettier...
That "roll on the counter" puts this in erotica category ya know.
That "roll on the counter" puts this in erotica category ya know.

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Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
Anonymous
21st Feb 2014 12:19pm
This is why i'm an AG, you never know..:)
good one Semaj!
good one Semaj!

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re: Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
21st Feb 2014 6:16pm
Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
21st Feb 2014 12:22pm
hmmm....does The Lord see any
val
idi
t y
in hedge funds?
write on'ly on, jimmy
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Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
21st Feb 2014 12:25pm
re: Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
21st Feb 2014 9:39pm
just like poor daddy left off the F
when he ucked momma
and i was borned
to misspelled life
tank shoe berry mulch dada
when he ucked momma
and i was borned
to misspelled life
tank shoe berry mulch dada
re: re: Re: the atheist hedges his bets and makes dessert
22nd Feb 2014 3:43am
one should never lose one's letters
whilst
pro
cre
atin.....but cou'be worser thangs 'appen,yknow?
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Re: the atheist hedges his bets and beds betty crocker
23rd Feb 2014 11:17pm
I like this. I like it a lot. A fine dance along the edge of what does it all mean? Complete with clever wordplay and ambiguous answers (:
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re: Re: the atheist hedges his bets and beds betty crocker
24th Feb 2014 1:43am
your comment reads like a good approach to life in general...thanks for jumping in my pool, good timing as i just skimmed off all the sharks