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Hitching
Entered in the comp. Crazy
It was twenty two years ago
we were young wild and crazy
it was New Years Eve upstate
New York snowing like hell
A few beers in and we thought
Florida sounded like a great idea
so we started walking to the highway
What the fuck were we thinking
it was obvious we weren't thinking
at all
We walked for what seemed like
forever sticking our thumbs out
to every passing car just two
chicks on a mission
A semi stopped and we climbed
in like we were waiting for it
all night
That 18 wheeler got us to the end
of PA and we hitched a ride back
to our hometown realizing Florida
wasn't the place to be beer and
ideas don't go well together
Now I watch you slowly deteriorate
everyday dying your slow painful
death with that alive, young twinkle
in your eye as you tell our hitching
story for maybe the last time
They called us crazy we call it
adventurous and when we meet in
the sky we'll be hitching again
For my dear friend <3
It was twenty two years ago
we were young wild and crazy
it was New Years Eve upstate
New York snowing like hell
A few beers in and we thought
Florida sounded like a great idea
so we started walking to the highway
What the fuck were we thinking
it was obvious we weren't thinking
at all
We walked for what seemed like
forever sticking our thumbs out
to every passing car just two
chicks on a mission
A semi stopped and we climbed
in like we were waiting for it
all night
That 18 wheeler got us to the end
of PA and we hitched a ride back
to our hometown realizing Florida
wasn't the place to be beer and
ideas don't go well together
Now I watch you slowly deteriorate
everyday dying your slow painful
death with that alive, young twinkle
in your eye as you tell our hitching
story for maybe the last time
They called us crazy we call it
adventurous and when we meet in
the sky we'll be hitching again
For my dear friend <3
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Re: Hitching
19th Feb 2014 2:29am
Wonderful tribute to your friend and the care free times you shared Tommie ... Beautiful
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19th Feb 2014 11:51pm
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19th Feb 2014 2:56am
Nice one T, I enjoy spontaneity, even if alcohol is the primary cause. lol
This made me laugh and think!
This made me laugh and think!
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19th Feb 2014 11:53pm
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19th Feb 2014 3:23am
What a fun memory...an anchor of happiness to hold onto during this profoundly sad time. You need to write down more stories begin keeping her memory alive while she still is. You're a devoted friend. Did you read to her this poem?
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re: Re: Hitching
20th Feb 2014 00:01am
Thank you GW, No I didn't read her the poem, but I will. We have so many stories. She means a lot to me, it's so hard to watch her in so much pain. She's a strong woman. :)
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20th Feb 2014 00:02am
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19th Feb 2014 8:21am
That's just beautiful Tommie Lynn. A worthy tribute for damn sure. You'll never lose those memories doll, so she'll always be with you. Your friend will love this in a big way girl. Beautiful ink Tommie Lynn. Bravo! XO
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re: Re: Hitching
20th Feb 2014 00:08am
I truly appreciate your words Twitch they mean so much. She's been through so much, and still goes strong. My heart breaks for her. Thank you for reading. :)
Re: Hitching
19th Feb 2014 7:27pm
Tommie such a beautiful memory of being young and carefree with your friend.. a very poignant and tender write thank you.. much love Crim
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20th Feb 2014 00:10am
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Anonymous
20th Feb 2014 3:32pm
The last few lines really bring it all together in a beautiful way. Well done.

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20th Feb 2014 8:45pm
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re: Re: Hitching
22nd Feb 2014 4:00am
After all the snow we've got I'm ready to go to Florida Gabriel. Thank you for reading. :)
Re: Hitching
21st Feb 2014 11:59pm
So wonderful...(memories),they're all we have :)(I hitched to fla. from mass. when I was 16...crazy stories (memories) :)
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22nd Feb 2014 4:05am
The memories we have are so great, it's nice to know we weren't the only ones thumbing it.Thank you Hman for reading one of my memories. :)
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23rd Feb 2014 8:00pm
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re: Re: Hitching
23rd Feb 2014 8:05pm
A huge thank you Hashman.
I believe you're right.
Even staring death in the face she's still tough as nails, I'm amazed by her strength! ;)
I believe you're right.
Even staring death in the face she's still tough as nails, I'm amazed by her strength! ;)