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daddy says.. i'm amazing
hello daddy..
happy valentines day
let us prey.
.
.
.
.
..
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dear lord..
we come to you tonight
to feed daddies high..
he
likes it when i
pretend to cry
reply like i'm shy
or play like i'm five..
it
drives him crazy
says. "i'm amazing!"
lady.love.less
undressed to impress
perverse sweats
close to death
that's how we connect..
confess me your pleasure
as you sever my treasure..
daddy.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
will you be
my valentine?
happy valentines day
let us prey.
.
.
.
.
..
.
dear lord..
we come to you tonight
to feed daddies high..
he
likes it when i
pretend to cry
reply like i'm shy
or play like i'm five..
it
drives him crazy
says. "i'm amazing!"
lady.love.less
undressed to impress
perverse sweats
close to death
that's how we connect..
confess me your pleasure
as you sever my treasure..
daddy.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
will you be
my valentine?
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Re: daddy says.. i'm amazing
14th Feb 2014 2:23pm
Re: daddy says.. i'm amazing
Anonymous
15th Feb 2014 6:54am
Much agreed with Envoy and in-depth write.
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Re: daddy says.. i'm amazing
15th Feb 2014 4:31pm
Re: daddy says.. i'm amazing
Mistress of Darkness I agree with John about you dad but you are so very beautiful and amazing.. much love Crim
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Re: daddy says.. i'm amazing
9th Mar 2014 2:56am
Re: daddy says.. i'm amazing
2nd Jul 2014 5:32am
Hmmm. The lines are truly drawing Miss D. It's what's between the lines that's even more intriguing. Raw, edible ink. Thanks for that. :)
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Re: daddy says.. i'm amazing
10th Nov 2014 9:29am
Reminds me of Freudian free word association used in therapy, which is not a bad thing...just unique.
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Re. daddy says.. i'm amazing
6th Mar 2017 10:42am
Re. daddy says.. i'm amazing
My father your father are demented and diabolical monstrosities, pathetic and weak mangy dogs. Written with class, beauty and great strength, Much Respect,
Survivor 👣
Survivor 👣
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Re. daddy says.. i'm amazing
2nd Dec 2024 4:25pm
This piece is very very telling. It was horror written in a beauty that conveys so much depth. Oh my, "prey" what a perfectly placed word. It pulled the whole piece together. I was absolutely brought to tearful anger in the flow of your piece.
Humbled.
lisa777
Humbled.
lisa777
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